Synthesis Essay 7

The assessment was made by the Project and Research Coordinator that generated results from essay number 6 and number 7 of the survey conducted on 21 October 2017. Essay 6 is about themselves and essay 7 is about anything that they have interest on.

1. Majority of the high school students of Educare will most likely fail the essay requirement for admissions due to the following:

a. Grammatical errors

b. Wrong use of punctuation marks, prepositions and capitalization

c. Non-conformity to sentence construction principles – Subject-Verb agreement

2. That among the one hundred fifty-four high school students of Educare, only 56 students may likely pass (36%) the essay requirement with considerations for proper use of words, grammar, spelling and the like; 91 high school students are most

Furthermore, this is to prepare the students in time for the visit of the EducationUSA at Educare on the first quarter of 2018 for an outreach program. The following are some recommendations that may be considered for implementation:

1. To integrate a theme-writing session for the students from grade 7 to grade 12 once a week; it will be checked by the teachers indicating necessary remarks to guide the students for the succeeding sessions;

2. To establish the official school publication that will be manned by students who are competent with the use of the English language; this will serve as an extra-curricular activity for the grading of student performance;

3. To integrate a literary and oratorical contest during the school’s intramurals;

4. To conduct a writing workshop for the students with demonstrations from the teachers;

5. To conduct a capacity building for teachers with the focus on research and literary