Critiquing Hawthorne's Favoritism in The Scarlet Letter

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Nathaniel Hawthorne’s character, Hester Prynne’s, actions creates a lot of controversy regarding Prynne’s sin, resulting in Hawthorne writing his critical essay, “On the Scarlet Letter.” D.H Lawrence critiques Hawthorne because he believes that Hawthorne favors Hester Prynne to an unnecessary extent , in The Scarlet Letter. Lawrence uses several devices that allow him to express his viewpoints about Hester Prynne and her sin. D.H. Lawrence uses biblical allusions, bullet-point syntax, and a mocking tone to convey his thoughts on why Hawthorne gives Hester Prynne too much credit. The biblical allusions in Lawrence’s essay reveal his disapproval towards Hawthorne’s writing choices regarding Hester Prynne and her sin. There are various amounts …show more content…

Lawrence utilizes bullet-point syntax in his essay to fully express his dissent towards Hawthorne’s positive attitude regarding Hester Prynne. The description of Hester’s scarlet letter uses syntax as “Adulteress. Alpha. Abel. Adam. A. America.” because the ‘A’ has several meanings according to Hawthorne (Lawrence). His one word sentences are simple, but significant in the sense that he gets his opinion across with bullet points. The sentences are like bullet points because the one word descriptions for the scarlet letter are clear and bold, which allows Lawrence to capture the audience’s attention. This is clearly stating Lawrence’s refusal to accept Hawthorne’s acceptance towards Hester Prynne and her sin. Bullet points give the effect of an important statement that is meant to be heard and not to be taken lightly. These bullet point sentences show his negative reaction because he does not approve of Hawthorne’s choices in the novel, so he makes his sentences short and clear. D.H. Lawrence makes the sentences as simple as possible when stating, “The fiery heart. A. Mary of the Bleeding Heart. Mater Adoleratal A. Adulteress. Glittering with gold thread…” (Lawrence). These short phrases allow Lawrence to signify his discontent towards Hawthorne by repeating important words that relate to Hester Prynne. This is bullet point syntax because of the choppy, but clear message that Lawrence conveys. The “A” between each of the word descriptions is a reminder of the letter …show more content…

D.H. Lawrence makes many sarcastic remarks about the adulteress, including the statement, “put her upon the scaffold and worship her there” (Lawrence). He mocks the way Nathaniel Hawthorne praises Hester because he finds the situation to be much bigger than Hawthorne does. Although standing on the scaffold is a punishment, Lawrence tries to make a joke of it and mock Hawthorne’s attitude. Hester commits a crime that is completely illegal and essentially is praised for her actions; however, Lawrence believes that she is still a criminal, which is why mocks the scene where Hester is put on the scaffold. His sarcastic statement is mocking Hawthorne’s worship towards the sinner. His derision continues when the scarlet letter almost loses its importance of meaning and he comments “go home and dance a witch’s jig of triumph, and stitch yourself a Scarlet Letter…” (Lawrence). Lawrence ridicules Hawthorne with his satirical language about making their own scarlet letter because the letter “A” is not something to be proud of, yet he uses it to mock the author. D.H. Lawrence utilizes a harsh mocking tone when joking about the letter on Hester’s bosom because it seems that Hawthorne frequently changes the meaning of the “A” to make it seem less harsh. The sarcastic comments

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