Cyberworld, Our Home
In "Do Not Fear the Cybermind", Daniel Wegner explains our dependence on the internet and views it as a positive effect on humanity if we use it for the right purpose. Wegner praises the cyber world as this great and powerful bubble where people can be connected. In the beginning of the essay, he reveals how humans use technology and in which circumstances. Wegner also provides different researches to back up his argument. One of them proves the difference between how many facts people can retain depending on whether or not they can use the internet to record the given information. After he states all the supporting researches and opinions on how we utilize the internet in our lives, Wegner moves on to question how we have become massively dependent on the cyberworld. His variety of questions leads into his next point of how the cyberworld can be seen as a positive effect on our lives. According to Wegner, the human mind is not made to remember everything; we use a method
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called transactive memory to store specific information. We also gather needed information through other people, not just the internet. For example, Wegner and his wife, Toni, each remembers the placement of different household items. In sum, Wegner states that the cyberworld helps us to connect and interact with each other. Although Wegner portrays the advantages of utilizing technology through specific diction, organization, and examples, the negatives points stand out more in the text and in real life. The invention of technology has eliminated personal communication and increased our obsession with technology. I disagree with his final stance that we can all be a part of this great cyberworld. Wegner creates reliability through the use of organization. He chooses to explain our obsession with technology first and then gives an explanation of why technology is better than what it seems like. The format of this text works advantageously towards Wegner because he states his points towards the end. Despite all these researches and our instinct to turn towards the internet, we have the opportunity to be connected and "be part of the biggest, smartest mind ever" (Wegner 389). Wegner is able to create reliance towards the readers because he approaches both sides of the argument. If the essay only focused on why the internet is beneficial to the society, the text could feel biased to the readers. Along with organization, he also includes many different examples to confirm his arguments stated in the text. When Wegner talks about how the "desire to consult the Web is almost like an itch", he supplements two researches to show that he is informed on this topic (Wegner 388). In addition, he includes a personal example when stating his argument to be relatable to his audience. From this example, the readers can think about times when one would ask a family member in the house where a certain item is because that person is in charge of those "memory duties" (Wegner 389). His specific examples create a connection with his readers and intrigue them to agree with his arguments. Wegner's level of diction in this text reveals the correct audience. He targets millennials and uses appropriate diction to get his voice heard. Since Millennials use technology more than any other age groups, Wegner keeps his word choice laid back and writes in an easy-going voice. Most of his word choice in this text consists of everyday language and he keeps away from difficult vocabularies. He utilizes first person, especially "we", continuously in his essay. He uses direct questions ("How did this happen? How did we become so dependent on these gadgets?") to engage the reader, clearly prove his point, and show how he is going to approach his subjects (Wegner 388). Millennials, rely and the internet for information, this format makes it easy to understand and follow along. While Wegner uses diction and organization to his advantage, his factual point that the internet connects us and holds more rewards seems unlikely.
Rather, we are stripped away from the world when we use technology. Even in his essay he states that we can only "return to our own humble little personal minds" when we are "trapped for a moment without our internet link" (Wegner 389). Technology constantly pulls us out from reality that we can have personal time only when we take a break from technology. The "connections" through the cyberworld also discourages the development of personality. The use of social media creates stereotypes and people change themselves to look better on social media. We have a constant mask online that we turn off when we walk outside. Everything on the internet is used to draw attention, not truly connecting the world together. The cyber society not only it brings us apart from each other, but it also cuts off the connection within
ourselves. The fake connection with other people and the disconnection within ourselves further proves our reliance on the cyberworld. Social media is not the only concern, but everything we do involves the internet ("The Web is always there, an ever present cloud of intelligence") (Wegner 388). There was a time when my Baylor account got hacked and I was not able to do anything. I couldn't access my emails, Canvas, Bear Web, or even use the Wi-Fi. I've never felt useless without the access to technology. I had to actually talk to people face to face because I was kicked out of the Web world for a few days. When I got my account back and was able to use my Wi-Fi again, I realized how many things I missed while I was gone. Even on Canvas, there were many messages sent out from professors and SI's. The cyberworld has spread over to universities, not just individuals. The Web society has created a world where games are created to force our technological devices out of our hands. Phones are stacked in the middle of the dinner table to keep from unconsciously reaching towards them. When we finally "tumble back to earth from our flotation devices in the cloud", we feel out of place and awkward (Wegner 389). Even face-to-face communication has changed to Facetime and Skype calls. Something as important as an interview is sometimes also done through Skype. Is this worthy of the words smart and intelligent? Or is it all simulated and pretend? Without the internet, we feel and are useless. Our transactive memory can only reach up to a certain point and then we have to rely on the internet. Information is always being produced and the only way that we can reach and utilize those is through the cyberworld. Through the use of diction, organization, and examples, Wegner believes technology can create good connections. However, our society and interactions with the internet proves that we are slowly falling into deep spiral of a fabricated world.
When discussing the impact of memory on daily life, Foer explains that “the average person squanders about forty days a year compensating for things he or she has forgotten… everyday there seems to be more to remember…with a memory like Ben Pridmore’s I imagined life would be more qualitatively different--and better”(MWE page 7). This point highlights how important memory truly is. With a poor memory, we struggle with recalling even the simplest of observations and events. In addition, Foer uses confirmation to persuade the reader that having a good memory has positive effects on intelligence, noting that it would make him “…more persuasive, more confident, and in some fundamental sense smarter…” as well as a “better journalist, friend, and boyfriend”(MWE page 7). Finally, through Foer’s use of confirmation, we are brought to the realization that without memory, “our world would immediately crumble”(MWE page 19), especially in a situation where “all the world’s ink [becomes] invisible and all our bytes [disappear]”( MWE pade 19). Foer successfully defends his argument that without textual aids and external means of remembering information, we as a society would lose a vast amount of knowledge solely due to our inability to successfully retain memories. These three pieces of evidence effectively confirm Joshua Foers primary claim that memory is
Carr concludes his excerpt with the statement “I missed my old brain,” because he was once so active in his learning, but now with exposure to the internet he has become close to being the contrary. Successfully, does Carr create a stance on how the internet has had a negative impact on how a person thinks and learns, from trading away an “old linear thought process” in return “for the riches of the Net.” Also, Carr creates a point that if society continues in this new form of mind, everyone will become human HALs and turn rogue against
Nicolas Carr debates that by allowing the internet to invade our “quiet spaces,” we will sacrifice ourselves (Carr,13). Philosopher, Rene Descartes, said “I Think, Therefore I am.” The idea of our ability to think as being part of our essence, as Descartes said, is established by Nicolas Carr. He presumes that the internet is robbing humans of their essence. Without the ability to think, we become the “artificial intelligence” (Carr,
From communicating with one another to researching for an essay, these high-tech gadgets are constantly being used. Unfortunately this is slowly becoming a danger to the human mind and an individual's ability to carry out simple tasks. This can be shown through the examples in Carr’s novel. He states multiple times that technology is damaging the brain and is struggling to do the simple tasks it should be able to do. Through his multiple examples, it is clear that technology is hurting us because we can no longer contemplate, concentrate, remember certain details, and more. Although, we cannot avoid using technology, we should be mindful of how often we use
Carr explains how the internet can distract us making it harder to focus on tasks. He explains how processing information has become harder. Notifications, ads, popups can make it difficult if you are trying to read an article or book (Carr 57). The internet has become the center of our attention (Carr 57). Carr is explaining how this is the reason why we are struggling to comprehend a certain piece of information. He adds in his article that scientists, researchers and educators have also noticed the difference in concentration. And in further detail, he explains that we fail to see the important information, thus affecting cognition. He says that the information we gather is not valuable unless we know the meaning behind it. Carr concludes with explaining that the more the internet evolves the less valuable information is to
Atlantic journalist Nicholas Carr confesses that he feels something has been “tinkering with his brain.” The internet, he fears, may be messing with our minds. We have lost the ability to focus on a simple task, and memory retention is steadily declining. He is worried about the effect the internet has on the human brain, and where it may take us in the future. In response to this article, Jamais Cascio, also a journalist for the Atlantic, provides his stance on the issue. He argues that this different way of thinking is an adaptation derived from our environment. Ultimately, he thinks that this staccato way of thinking is simply a natural evolution, one that will help to advance the human race.
The evolution of technology has had a great impact on our lives, both positive and negative. While it is great to be able to be able to travel faster and research anything with the smartphones that now contain almost every aspect of our daily lives, there are also many advances within the realm of technology. Nicholas Carr presents information on the dependency aircraft pilots have on automated technology used to control airplanes in the article “The Great Forgetting”. Likewise, in “Is Facebook Making Us Lonely?” written by Stephen Marche, the result of isolation and pseudo relationships created by social media is shown throughout the article. We live in such a fast paced society with so much information at our fingertips that we don’t make
Karp also questions whether the Internet has changed his course of thinking (Carr, 732). Bruce Friedman explained how he barely has the tolerance for reading long pieces, and skimming is now how he reads (Carr, 732). By Carr discussing changes brought by other technologies, he strengthens the support of his claims. He proves that technology does have a way of affecting us cognitively whether the effect is negative or positive. Carr also proves that as technology advances our mind is modified to according to those advances.
Millions out of the population world wide, has let the internet dominate over them in abrogating forms. The internet can be useful in several ways, such as academic, researching, gaining more knowledge out of a topic, a person has found interesting. On the other hand, it can also be used in negative ways, by drowning the person to surf the web more than 3 hours. Not acknowledging the situation that can lead them too. Such as excluding them, from the outside world. Several may discover the beauty of the internet, as others are pulled aside into the dark route, by themselves. William Gibson, author of the article, “The Net Is a Waste of Time” demonstrates the differences on how technology has involved more than a decade, and the influences being
The articles “How Computers Change the Way We Think” by Sherry Turkle and “Electronic Intimacy” by Christine Rosen argue that technology is quite damaging to society as a whole and that even though it can at times be helpful it is more damaging. I have to agree and disagree with this because it really just depends on how it is used and it can damage or help the user.The progressing changes in technology, like social media, can both push us, as a society, further and closer to and from each other and personal connections because it has become a tool that can be manipulated to help or hurt our relationships and us as human beings who are capable of more with and without technology.
Carr discusses the effects that the Internet has on our minds and the way we think, as well as the way media has changed. Our minds no longer focus. When in conversation with people we are constantly distracted by the technological advances our era has brought. Text messages, emails, pop culture drama has all taken over thoughts.
The extensive number of hours spent on computers today is "masking" many human needs. In the United States today, over 57 million people are using these hours by getting Online (Telesys). Information can be accessed through 320 million different web pages with a single push of a button. Hours are spent receiving and giving information. People are now, more than ever, able to communicate with others by using the World Wide Web. Someone once said, what is one mans gain is another mans loss. The computer age, especially the new use of the Internet has caused a drastic loss of personal, face to face human interaction. People feel more secure typing a hello rather than saying a hello. Understanding that throughout the day, people are still communicating in many ways, the numbers suggest that human interaction will only continue to drop through the use of the Internet. The Internet has interfered and substituted a main facet of communication that is imperative for a human's psychological and physiological needs. Everyone understands that humans need interaction with one another on a daily basis. Without it, we become withdrawn from society and from others. Although the World Wide Web offers opportunities to communicate, this new form of human interaction is simply a substitution for the psychological and physiological needs of humans. Our computer screens are simply masks for representing human interaction. These masks are showing others a façade of our true selves.
The technology nowadays has an influence on our lives, it has affected everything in it. When this technological revolution started, we didn't expect that it would affect our emotions, and our feelings. All we expected is that technology would develop our ability to have easier life and control nature. But what really happened is that the technology started to be part of us that we can't live without. The Internet is one of the technologies which appeared in our lives, and now it is dominating our lives. The Internet is replacing many things in our lives : Email has replaced the postal services , E-shopping (e.g., ebay) is replacing regular shopping, and now you can arrange your dates and relationships on the Internet.
Life without technology, is that even possible? In today’s time, we as a society have become mentally and physically engrossed in technology. Whether it is an iPhone, iPad, or iMac, we are engaging in digital technology as an escape from the outside world. Sherry Turkle, a psychologist and professor at MIT, now the author of Alone Together: Why We Expect More From Technology and Less From Each Other, has been studying how people and digital technology get along for thirty years. She suggests that digital technology is seductive because it serves the purpose that we never have to be alone. We constantly have that ability to interact in a way that makes us feel comfortable. Turkle explains the paradox of technology well; how it can compare to some real life emotional bonds but on the other hand can just be too much.
From a positive perspective, computers provide us with vast amount of resources and information and as a species have made us much smarter. Individually, it has made us more knowledgeable because we can easily find the information we need, although, if the internet were to be taken away, we would become less smart. As the human race becomes more interconnected, it means we have more abilities and the internet has us all wired into one ‘super brain’ that is smarter than any individual. Another example of computing technology is ‘texting’. Humans can now communicate over long distances instantly and easily, but there is a common misconception that ‘texters’ are ‘dumbin...