Solitary Confinement Thesis

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INTRODUCTION
Hook: Solitary is often referred as the prison within the prison by correctional officers, and for good reason.

Context (background information needed to understand your topic): Solitary confinement is what we will talk about today, and why it should be banned from prisons. For those of you who don’t know Solitary confinement is a form of imprisonment in which an inmate is isolated from any human contact, often apart from members of prison staff, for 22–24 hours a day, with a sentence ranging from days to decades. As humans, this is not good for people.

PURPOSE/THESIS STATEMENT (with Speech Map): First of solitary confinement overall is bad for the human …show more content…

REFUTATION
Counterclaim (opposing view): Others may say that solitary can somehow satisfy the interests of the victims and members of the public to see wrong-doers punished.

Refute (how do you prove them wrong? What would you say?): But it’s wrong to want to others suffer no matter what they did, normal prison is good enough. Seeing them in a place like solitary should not be what satisfies victims, because solitary violates basic human rights.

Evidence: Solitary confinement can actually fit the definition of torture, as stated in some international human rights treaties. This means that it constitutes a violation to human rights. As an example, the UN Convention Against Torture clearly defines torture as an act through which severe pain and suffering, whether physical or mental, is intentionally inflicted on a person for punishment, intimidation, information or for other reasons, such as discrimination.

Reasoning: So, solitary can be defined as torture, who would deliberately want to see someone be tortured.

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