So Much Water So Close To Home Analysis

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After reviewing both stories, I decided to go with the shorter version of the “So Much Water So Close to Home” story. Although the short and long versions bear some similarities, the differences between them are strong. The long versions gives specific details, which leave no room for thought. While the short passage, the writer lets the readers put their imagination to use, trying to figure out what had, has, and is going to happen in the story. In both versions, the author starts by stating an identical theme, Claire Husband was seating at the table eating. Obviously something is going on between them, because he is eating with aggressiveness, trying to avoid conversation. In cooperation her husband Stuart is very upset stating “Goddam it, why can’t people mind …show more content…

As a whole, they decided to continue their mini vacation, claiming the girl wasn’t going anywhere, and the journey to get where they were was too exhausting to go back and report her. They all agreed when the trip was over to report the body on the way home. After all they did not commit the crime. During this time the longer version gave more details of the events that were taking place during the fishing trip. Although the short version did not capture all of the details, I don’t think it was necessary information to know. I think the longer version made Stuart and his friends look inhumane, having no respect or regards for life of another individual. For example “Vern went to sleep, but the others told coarse stories and spoke of vulgar or dishonest escapades out of their past, and no one mention the girl until Gordon Johnson, who’d forgotten for a minute commented on the firmness of the trout they’d caught, and the terrible coldness of the river water.” This statement allowed the readers to believe that the men was not concerned at all, because they continued to get

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