Short Story Comparison: "The Cave" and "The Hammer Man"

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A society often reveals its own perversity in the way it treats those who stray too far away from its mainstream. In Jean McCord's story, "The Cave", the leader of a small-town gang beats up the narrator after he befriends a homeless man. In "The Hammer Man", two disgruntled policemen harass the narrator after she admires the basketball skills of a disturbed boy on her street. In both cases, the violence of the characters who represent mainstream society -- the gang and the police -- forces us to question our underlying assumptions about what is normal and what is not. While both authors invite us to label particular characters as deviant at the start of their stories, they force us to see by the end that there is no way to measure deviance in a society that is itself morally skewed. In an insane world, these stories remind us, the only sane people are crazy.

In the beginning of both stories, the authors invite us to judge one of the characters as deviant. In "The Cave", we see George only through Charley's eyes and thus reach the same conclusion Charley does after his first encounter with George, namely "that he [is], a bum" (McCord 3). While Charley concedes that George's kind eyes make him look "harmless"(2) and that his comments about history make him seem educated, he insists that the old man's disheveled appearance and strange attachment to the cave prove that he must have a few "bats flying around in his belfry" (3).

In "The Hammer Man", the narrator seems to be part of a community of such people. "Crazy" Manny is waiting on her porch "all day and night" in order to gain revenge for the insults she directed at his mother (Bambara 52). When the narrator's father discovers Manny's intentions, she smashes ...

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... Man" represent those forces in our society that try to pull the individual back into line when she or he strays too far away from what is considered normal. Charley and the narrator resist this pressure for a time, and in doing so, reveal random the path of normalcy really is. While both Charley and the narrator retreat into conformist behavior at the end, their momentary alliance with someone outside the mainstream shows us how impossible it is to draw a clear line between those who are deviant and those who are not. In our imperfect world -- in which racism, poverty, injustice and even war still exist -- those who do not fit in may have something important to teach us. Abraham Lincoln, St. George the Dragonslayer, and Jesus Chris, all carvings on the walls of George's cave, were all reviled as crazy before they were regarded as prophets of the truth.

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