Shooting An Elephant

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After the harsh criticism in my last draft of your story “The Shooting of an Elephant”, you have really improved the fluency of the writing and overall flow of the plot. I believe “The shooting of an elephant” portrays the values of power, morals and ethics. Throughout, you express these values with great success, which casts this story as an emotional one that touches upon some of the most influential themes that can be conveyed through narrative writing, amplified through manipulating the setting and language. Throughout your story, themes and ideas are exemplified well. Firstly there is power; examples of warped conceptions of power are regularly implemented throughout, as to provide the audience with an understanding of your unusual surroundings in the country of Burma. This is evident from the beginning of the story, when you set the scene regarding the …show more content…

Here you describe how, despite your authoritative figure, you are constantly disrespected by the locals as they hurl insults and even physically abuse you through foul tackles whilst playing football. It is well established that the power dynamics in colonial Burma are far from differences in race. You express the fact that although you hold an authoritative stature, you are still powerless to cease the abuse received by the oppressed Burmese locals. Through this, the idea of the twisted power is well demonstrated. Another important theme that you portray, is judgement based on morals and principles, and is most prevalent during the mental conflict you experience during the climax of the story. The elephant encouraged the locals by ravaging the bazaar and you are called by the locals to kill the animal. Through the text, your thoughts portray to the reader as you contemplate killing the elephant to gain respect and more power over the locals. Despite these thoughts, you realise that to kill the

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