Saturday Climbing

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Title At first glance, the title seems straightforward. I think the poem will be on the subject of coping with letting things go in life. Comparable to Saturday Climbing, with the main character, Barry, being forced to recognize that his daughter, Moira, is growing up and he has to let her go eventually. Paraphrase: The writer speaks in third person. The writer says “she” dreads letting something go because she is intimidated by the thought of a calamity striking her. This feeling of distress drags her down awfully until she realizes she cannot handle the weight any longer. With a deep breath, she lets whatever she is contending with go. By unburdening herself, she has realized the beauty of letting go. The beauty allowed her to identify her …show more content…

“She was worried that everything might fall apart.” “But she felt this heaviness, every day, growing in her heart.” “And what’s when she saw beauty above her brow,” “telling her it was now *her* time to grow.” The writer uses personification to describe how her mind could indulge in the fantasy of keeping things as they are. “The chains in her mind had lied to her, saying that they were present to hold everything in place.” Imagery is present to help the reader visualize the heaviness the writer felt every day because of her fear. “But she felt this heaviness, every day, growing in her heart.” Learning how to let go is a metaphor the writer uses to show the journey of spreading one's imaginary wings and moving on to a new path in life. “But now her wings hold everything together. It was time to fold her fears away.” Attitude (Tone) The writer speaks in a tone of fright at the beginning of the story. “She was worried that everything might fall apart.” She is hesitant to let go because she is uncertain of what will transpire after. This fear is a hindrance to her, so she realizes she has to be courageous. The writer has an attitude of receptiveness because she exposes herself to the horror of letting go. “She opened her hands and let it all go.” After she takes her deep breath, the writer has an attitude of ease because she has come to terms with her fears and finally surpassed the nightmare of

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