Ray Stantz Narrative

Two days passed since the Ghostbusters brought the woman to the hospital. They were unable to visit her due to her need to rest and only family members allowed seeing her at the time.
The day that the Ghostbusters were able to visit, only Ray Stantz came. The others were busy doing their own thing.
He arrived to the hospital after he and his friends/teammates got a job done and then dropping the three off to their destinations.
Ray was still in uniform, not caring to get out of it even if he had civilian wear underneath it.
As he walked up to the visitors’ desk, many of the women there, including the nurses and doctors, looked at him in awe. They either drooled over him or whispered to one another about him; in a good way, Ray guessed, since

Nevertheless, this time he only smiled nicely at them and just kept walking to the woman’s room.
Ray got to her room and opened the door ajar before knocking lightly to tell her he was there.
She didn’t hear the low knock, being dispersed while gazing out the window. The only time she then realized he was there was when he cleared his throat.
When she turned to see who it was, she smiled then, knowing whom he was.
“You must be the one I was told saved my life?”
Ray smiled back, “yep, that was me.” He then saw her right ankle and his smile fell. Her ankle was bandaged up, and he soon realized why.
He did that to her.
“I’m sorry about your ankle. But it was the only thing I was able to grab ahold of to save your life.”
She waved the explanation off. “Don’t worry about it. I don’t blame you any. I blame that damn ghost. I mean, if it wasn’t for you or your friends, I probably wouldn’t be here today. I thank you for saving me.” She smiled at him once again.
He grinned.
Ray still hadn’t moved away from the door, though the door was closed behind him.
“You can come closer, unless you’re in a hurry and that’s why you’re hangin’ by the