Persuasive Essay On Military Service

Introduction (USE FOR DISCUSSION FORUM)
1. A common saying in the military is “You get what you put into,” but for some service members this is not always true.
2. Certainly the military affected me a lot of different ways but the first comes to mind complete loss of trust of men and women.
3. Another important way the military affected me was my overall health.
4. Consequently, the only positive things the military has affected me in a good way is that I have a decent clearance job and my ability to pay off the debt that was created during my military service.
5. The military affected my trust in people and my health, but the only positive thing that came out of it is the job that I do now.

Conclusion
1. The military is supposed to be

The military, itself, is not the bad thing, we need it, but the military environment can destroy a person’s trust.
3. The current active duty healthcare has dramatically different than it was in 2002. It is more involved with the service members and no one longer goes without medical treatments. All medical complaints must be addressed or the service member’s supervisor may receive a reprimand in their service record, which could their promotion standing.
4. My current job pays well, I do like it for the money and the ability to finally pay off my active duty debts, but it is not what I do not want to do the rest of my life.
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6. I truly hope the military service does improve even more in the next ten years, hopefully it will be just as a positive thing for not only for men but also more so for women.

No one else will ever service any branch of the military again, because of mine and two other female members who also experience almost nothing but bad things in the military.
e. The military can be a positive experience for most men but for the majority of women, it is a bad thing not only on the women’s trust of fellow humans but it can kill her health in a short period.
2. Main Idea 2:
a. Another important way the military affected me was my overall health.
b. I was a runner and swimmer who had completed my first 4K marathon in 2001, so the physical fitness was not an issue when I first enlisted before my service time.
c. During my service time, I was refused medical treatment from pneumonia early on, which later on developed into lung damage and chronic asthma.
d. It was taken me nearly ten years just to recover my health enough to be able to go to the gym, walk on a treadmill and not pass out from the lack of oxygen.
e. The military changed my health for the worse but it did not change my own wanting of a better