Charles G.D. Robert’s poem “The Skater” evokes a euphoric and spiritual feeling through the description and personification the speaker applies to the wintry wilderness around him. The use of couplets ensures the poem is read smoothly and effortlessly, similar to the act of skating leisurely through the forest; while alliterative word pairings add to the flow and the mood of the poem by creating a world that sounds fantastical in its description, yet realistic and capricious in its characterization. The use of personification in the poem suggests that even though the speaker is out in the wilderness, he does not consider himself to be alone, and perceives that the natural world around him is his audience. A sense of belongingness is created …show more content…
as the woods around the skater are in a deep slumber, but once he breaks that silence with a “sibilant twang” of his skates, the skaters calm feeling is dislodged and replaced by fear (13). The couplets initially help to convey a sense of smooth rhythm as the skater glides over the frozen lake, but once nature awakens to his presence, the couplets provide the poem with the same uncontrollable speed the skater is experiencing. The syntax throughout the poem is diverse, enjambed sentences roll over to the next line, only to be interrupted by a period, comma, or semi-colon. The poem uses patterns such as these to create and shift the mood, as well as paint a picture in the readers mind. Through the use of personification, the speaker describes the woods as his audience, and the wind as his guide, and this creates a pattern of characters out of the natural world. Initially the “hung hushed” forest remains peaceful, and the only sound around is the melody of the wind and the vibrations created through the sound of the skates creasing through the frozen river (5). The world and the speaker are at ease, enjoying each others company, and are accompanied only by the “wandering wind” (8). The wind acts to push the speaker on through the forest, until it deserts him and he is “left behind” to follow his own mind (15). The forest is awoken by the “whisper” and “twang” of his skates, and the speaker perceives that the previous tranquil woods are now aware of his presence (13). Alliterative word-parings throughout the poem such as “hung hushed” and “ghostly, glimmering” draw attention to themselves and act to emphasize the forests mood and human like nature. The wilderness becomes personified in a frightening manner, and the shadows of the trees drive the skater out of their home, reversing the welcoming he previously receives from the harsh winter land. From beginning to end the personification of the forest changes, shifting the mood of the initially welcoming and fantastical forest into a forbidden woodland. The poem is written entirely in couplets, helping to create a rhythm that is consistent with the activity of skating.
The mixture of punctuation and enjambment to each couplet forces the reader to stop and start, yet the poem still carries a steady and persistent cadence throughout. By using this technique, combined with the portrayal of nature, a stream of consciousness is formed allowing the reader to imagine the raw beauty and unpredictability of nature from the skater’s point of view. The skater is in a fantasy land until the “wandering wind” abandons him, flipping the script of the previously peaceful woods and creating a solitary and frightening mood for the duration of the last eight lines (15). The use of an em dash in line twenty interrupts the continuation of the couplet, and despite still rhyming, it signals that a shift has occurred and breaks the pattern that remained unchanged throughout the earlier portion of the poem. Following the em dash, the speed of the poem picks up and the skater no longer finds himself welcomed by the wilderness, the melancholy mood and pattern of the poem is disturbed and replaced by a frantic and fearful ending. Up until the break, the use of couplets suggests an interconnectivity between lines, as well as giving the poem a melodic tone. Once the em dash appears, the poem becomes rushed, just like the …show more content…
skater. Throughout the poem the sentence structure varies, changing from one line to the next. By mixing up the sentence structure and utilizing enjambment, the poem constantly makes the reader stop and start, just long enough to have a picture painted in their head of the sprawling white world the skater observes. The speed at which the speaker is moving at is displayed through enjambment, “Then I stayed the rush of my eager speed / and silently went as a drifting seed, —” (19-20). However, some lines come to abrupt stops, forcing the reader to emphasize the last word of each line, as well as attracting attention. “Shapes in the fir-gloom drifted near. / In the deep of my heart I heard my fear.” (25-26). Another example of the poem’s discontinuous nature comes from the authors use of commas, which help to give feeling to the skater as well as provide description about his observations, “And I turned and fled, like a soul pursued, / From the white, inviolate solitude.” (27-28). The text breaks conventionality through the variability of its sentence structure, yet it still glides smoothly along. Throughout the poem the variability of each line distinguishes it from the next, yet the use of couplets assures the notion that each line is connected to the other. “The Skater “ uses a variety of patterns to help illustrate the wonder of untouched, barren winter land, and the breaks in the pattern distinctly present a shift in the mood of the poem.
Alliteration and consonance play a key role in breaking the rhythmic pattern, as well as adding to the personification of the forest, the river, and the wind. The forest’s human-like characteristics are important, because they show that the skater is not alone, even though he is in the middle of nowhere. The shifting mood of the poem depends upon the building up of patterns; when the pattern is broken nature awakens and acknowledges the skater’s presence. The form of the poem reads steadily as the skater enjoys the wonders of untouched nature, but when the silence is broken and the trees around the skater awake the speed of the poem rapidly picks up. The combination of enjambment and the couplet form adds to the interconnectivity of the poem, while some sentences are prematurely cut short, creating variety between each line. It is clear that without these patterns the poem would be incomplete, they play an important role in creating and setting differing moods of the poem, while also enhancing the scenery and providing the wilderness with a life-like
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The use of alliteration, tone, mood, theme and other elements that construct a well balanced poem are in this piece of literature.
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