Personal Narrative: My Roller Coaster Ride

I was shaking nervously. I was going on a really scary ride called X-2 with my cousins. We were close to getting on the ride, no chickening out now, Heh. I was scared to death. Everybody looked happy and excited to go on the ride. And I was as pale as a ghost could ever be because We were going on the next ride.

Oh and also YOU RIDE BACKWARDS ON THIS RIDE!!! I mean what kind of person makes ride where you ride backwards where you don’t know what’s going to happen and makes the ride 10 times scarier!!! That’s just crazy right!? It doesn’t make any sense at all! And when you’re in line they tell you things not to do on the ride like closing your eyes because it makes it even scarier!

Now I have goosebumps on my body, thanks to the people who made this ride. When I finally started to get comfortable it was are turn to go on the ride! C’mon it had to be right when I got comfortable, it just had to be. I stepped on the ride shaking with fear, strapped the seat belt on, pulled down the bar over my head. I found myself breathing really hard!

I wonder if this ride was scarier before because it might have been rickedy because we didn’t have better technology before so maybe I should be glad that we were going on the ride now or I shouldn’t be glad because maybe they redid the ride to make it
even scarier than what it was before.

I’m gonna check after the

ride

I hope there isn’t a drop, but I think there is a drop because we're backwards and we keep on up so, yeah it’s probably drop. “Emily is there a big drop?” I Said. “yeah a really big one,” she said. WEll my hope just died!

I wish i could just crawl in hole and stay there forever because we’ve been going up for I think one minute. Im scared to death, but how hard could it-AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! “No, nevermind it’s actually bad please st-Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!” “Ugh is there mor-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! “Why would I ever... ooh ice-cream, I would totally dig for an ice-cr-Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. “Oooff”. Ow that hurt my stomach, we just made very violently stop at the end of the ride.

I jumped off the ride saying,” Wow that was the best ride I’ve ever been on in my life, Can we go on again!”
Sure,” Emily said.

I thought of all the scary rides I’ve been on like goliath, twisted colossus and many more, but this one beats all of them 100% because this was the scariest and most fun ride I have ever been on in my life.