Personal Narrative Analysis

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Throughout the essay, I revised my grammar, word choice, punctuation, and sentence structure. To help my audience have clarity of the college students I was mentioning in my essay I included the time and place in the first paragraph. I cut out text and added words in the second sentence to make it clear to readers when I transitioned to students in my topic; fourth sentence because it was too wordy to understand how college students life style altered when they attended college; fifth sentence because it was imprecise how abnormal sleeping patterns was caused from sleeping; and in the last sentence I replaced a semi-colon punctuation with a word to help readers identify my thesis and clarify that it was a part of the final sentence. In the

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a bath. Then we watched a little more tv together and then my sister and me started packing a bag full of stuff we can do in the car on the way to Texas. When we finished we went to bed and it is like 9:00 at night. In the morning at 4:30 we woke up and we brush our teeth and got into some comfy close if we wanted to or we can stay in pajamas and my sister and me stayed in our pajamas and our dad and mom got into comfy clothes and we packed are car and got blankets and pillows and we got into the car and we left and it was about 5:00.
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