Personal Narrative: A Torch, A Death

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Chloe Folmar Creative Writing 2B October 7, 2015 A Car, A Torch, A Death Picture it: lungs struggling to expand, to fill with oxygen, to aid the infiltration of sweet, cold air through my veins, my bones, my muscles. Leaning back on the stiff driver’s seat, the word “relax” dribbling repeatedly from my lips; just like what they had all told me to do. Hot tears begin to seep from my eyes, drying into sticky streaks across my feverish face. Seconds amble by, the searing pain in my body prolonging each one. I gasp in a shaky breath of air; the trembling in my arm ebbs enough for me to clutch my keys and shove one into the ignition. The engine chokes as I pull out onto the dark, skinny road and the lights ignite the dull, ghoulish trees. …show more content…

When I inhale, with exhausting effort, my lungs are infused with fire. I exhale what I am leaving behind. The more I ponder, the more I envy the headlights driving south; although I know that the time ahead of me lays waiting, sinister. I feel the tears begin to cloud my eyes again. I want to crack the door so I can just fall out: but then my vision is overwhelmed with static, and the power of my memories overcomes my sense of sight. I remember what she did before I left; she strapped her heart in the backseat and let me drive away with it. And now I begin to understand what sacrifice really is. Panic slowly trickles into my vulnerable, broken mind; soon my resistance has been overwhelmed. Picture it: a fragile body struggling to maintain peace of mind, to ignore the devil’s whispers in her ear, to grow not in fear but in strength, sanity, hope. I hang my head in pain, love and confusion melting together into anxiety; just like what they had all told me not to do. I want to protect, to help, but I know I need to accept that this is not my decision, not my battle. But not fighting might be the thing that kills

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