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The time I accomplished something would have to be ever since I got a job myself, when I told my mom about the job she didn’t like the idea she wanted me to focus on school and helping her out at the house and taking care of my sisters. She wanted me to not worry and just worry about school but I see a lot of people my age working and getting money they earned by working and I got interested myself and for me it didn’t matter where I worked as long as I did. So me and her talked and I told her if I work and keep my grades okay to the point where I’m not failing to keep the job and when I get to failing bad quit it and just focus on it all on school and she agreed. I was so happy and excited cause I finally can be busy and work and make money off of that. When I told the boss about me working he …show more content…
said it was okay to not worry, I’ll be fine It felt great knowing people were so nice I was soon very excited and blessed for the amazing people who work here and help me with my job. When I got paid I was very happy cause I could take my mom to go eat at her favorite restaurant and help her with all the bills knowing It is very difficult being a single parent with 3 girls and even help my sisters out with their homework and everything they need help on.
It feels great knowing that I’m not being selfish of myself but helping other like my mom and sister when they need me. Knowing they can count on me is great cause I know that I feel like I can help whoever needs me. When I continued working at my restaurant I knew my mom was proud and happy for me working at an early age at 15 it feels great knowing that your mom is proud of you for working and helping her pay for stuff, saving money in case an emergency happens, and helping her and my sisters around. I also feel like I accomplished at being an older sister they also said that they wanted to start working and they can once they turn 16 I love the feeling knowing that you are both of your two little sisters role models. Once I start accomplishing a lot of things that make me happy I would continue doing it. For example, if I read tons of book over the weekend I get so happy I go back into
reading. Once I accomplish something I try and keep going for it if it doesn’t go the way it is suppose to go I try and keep trying State Rubric 4 3 2 1 Ideas and Development 30 Points The content is well suited for the audience, purpose, and mode. The main idea or thesis is clear. Ideas are fully developed and elaborated using details, examples, reasons, or evidence. The writer expresses an insightful perspective towards the topic. 30 The content is adequate for the audience, purpose, and mode. The main idea is evident but may lack clarity. Ideas are developed using some details, examples, reasons, and/or evidence. The writer sustains his/her perspective toward the topic throughout most of the composition. 23 The content is inconsistent with the audience, purpose, and mode. The main idea is not focused and leaves the reader with questions and making inferences to understand the main idea. Ideas are minimally developed with few details. May simply be a list of ideas. 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The story about I Martranika Gross, called changing my life. It all begin with many ideals that I had in mind to become while changing my life so my daughter will fix in. First was continue my education at Strayer University and a journey to follow. Next, becoming a role model with a pathway lay out for my daughter, a showing her not to stay you can’t to become successful. Finally, overcome obstacles first you have to have faith within yourself, and the key word is knowledge.
For instance, last year, I volunteered at an organization to take care of kids and help them with their homework. One day, I worked with a kid who was 5 years old. I helped him with his math homework and taught him how to add and subtract. I taught him patiently and carefully. After we were done, the kid learned how to add and subtract, and he told his mom what he learned. Then the kid’s mom came to me and said “Thank you” with a smile directed to me. At that time, I felt really happy, valuable, and helpful. This kind of happiness was different than the other happiness because this happiness came from helping others. When I feel happy, I am more willing to help. I am so proud that I made a good decision because I have found out the true significance of volunteering.
I was called into admin with three managers sitting around. My department just passed the district walk-through a week before, the department was doing great, so I was curious to see what this meeting was about. My boss and bosses boss where sitting down, a lady from human resources was phone conferencing in. Defining moments in my life have helped shape my mindset. More so, it has allowed me to venture in a way to live my life with pure happiness and fulfillment. My defining moment was being let go of my job. I was completely devastated and felt like I was kicked sideways.
It has been around 14 hours since I have gotten back from the Freshmen Retreat, and I happy to be able to write about the success of the trip in all parts, regarding my personal goal, what I learned about my fellow advisory peers, and realizing a bit more about myself.
One thing that really bothers me is how much I changed. I used to play games all day, not focus on school, wouldn't get in serious trouble, and was very innocent compared to my present day self. There are cons and pros of my past self compared to how I am currently. I am more happy of how I am now then I am before. As time changes, so do I and I can not stop that. What’s done has already been done and can’t be changed so you always have to look towards the future and never the past. The past will not definite who you are today unless you let it. I would have never expect that I would be transferred to a continuation high school in my freshman year. It is a bad thing to many people, but I am thankful that I am sent to it because I will learn
me the opportunity to self-analyze and reflect. I am now more than ever aware of the great role that my
...f becoming a better person! Thank you for all you give to me by just being in my life.
I always received great satisfaction from helping others. I remember at a young age, helping my grandmother with chores that she was no longer able to do for herself. As I got older, my grandmother became more dependent on me. I helped her cook, clean, administer medication and made sure she kept her doctor appointments. I now see myself doing these same things for my mother and father as they get older.
That summer after school I just wanted to find a job and start making some money. Going to college for anther four year was something I thought I could not handle. I final got a job at UPS unloading trucks. At first I thought how hard could it be? But every day I would come home exhausted from working in the heat. And then when I got tiny pay check, it hit me. From then on I decided that manual labor was something that I could not do the rest of my life and I could definitely not support a family on that income. A job behind a desk in the air conditioning was what I wanted.
I wake up every morning thrilled to be a mom. He is my world I am raising a young man to be an intelligent man who can think for himself. There are times when I catch myself thinking am I doing a good job, am I too hard on him. then he shows me I am doing a great job just by how he behaves in school at home and how sweet he is. When he tells me he is proud that I am his mom that makes me feel like I can do no wrong.ge it for
I love my big sister and seeing her struggle doing basic day to day tasks took a toll on me. I felt I had the responsibility to step up and take care of her and help with everything and anything she needed. I did everything from helping my sister tie her shoes to carrying her because she easily became exhausted from walking, to telling her she was going to survive this because we all needed her to keep fighting. This experience
Growing up I have always enjoyed helping others, helping others made them feel great knowing that I was able to make someone happy made me
As far back as I could remember, I was always in a rush to grow up and be responsible. I was about thirteen when I realized I wanted a job, so I could have my own money. I’d even fill out applications online, lying about my age but it never worked. A few birthdays went by and I was celebrating my sixteenth birthday and a few weeks later; I received my first retail job. My very first job was at a popular teen store called Aeropostale. I learned and experienced a lot working there and made friends as well. Although, I got what I desired, I often had uncertainties once I really got the feel for the part-time position. In life, people leave and things change and by the end of my employment, I would soon look back and realize it.
now. I am now seventeen years old and don’t regret a single day spent in my
Whenever I am faced with a problem and have to make a decision, I know that my mother will be behind me one-hundred percent no matter what avenue I choose to travel down is. It is a great feeling to know that someone is always going to support me in anything I choose to do. It alleviates much of the stress that comes along with making decisions. For example, when I could not make a decision and choose which college I was going to, a community college or a university, my mother reassured me that she would be happy with the choice I made, as long as it made me happy. Having my mother tell me that alleviated much of the pressure I felt to pick a college. I did not want to disappoint her, and knowing that I would not, made the decision a lot easier. ...