Personal Narrative: A Short Story

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I turned the car off and tossed the keys in the cup holder beside me. I jumped out of the car, and all it took was two beeps the locks slid down faster than I could realize that the car was now unaccessible. The key sat in the cup holder sparkling from the mid-day sunlight. Unfortunately, the keys were not the only thing locked inside the boiling car. This past summer, I went to Lake Martin with a family I regularly nanny for. With four kids all under the age of 8 and a baby on board, I always had my hands full. I was taking Bess, the baby, back to the cabin for her nap while the mom stayed at the pool with the other three kids. To avoid the hassle of moving the car seat from her car to mine, she gave me her keys, and I drove her car back. …show more content…

The second I didn’t have the air conditioning on full blast, sweat would drip from my forehead. When we got to the cabin, I turned the car off and placed the keys in the cup holder beside me. I shut my door and proceeded to the baby’s door, and two steps later I hear “beep beep.” The tahoe’s locks slid into place. My heart sank. It didn’t take long to put the pieces together that the keys and the baby were both locked into a suffocating car. I immediately called the mom, and she did not answer. I tried the dad, but he did not pick up either. I left them both messages, but I knew I didn’t have much time to wait. I ran inside, not knowing what to look for or where to look, but I came across a knife and a coat hanger. I had watched shows and figured if a criminal can pick a lock, why can’t I? However, it isn’t as easy as they make it look. Frustrated with myself, I screamed to the neighbors for help. Evidently I was hard to understand- one because I was crying, and two because they were about 300 feet away. Once I got the message across, I saw them hustling to come help me. I constantly was checking on the baby putting my face up to the glass. She remained conscious, free from many tears. About 10 minutes had

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