Outline For Lady Macbeth

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Macbeth Essay Outline
Essay Prompt:In a play full of evil and sorrowful events, one origin of provoking evil forces comes from one of the closest people to our main character. This would be his own spouse, Lady Macbeth.She shows many evil traits.

INTRODUCTION
I. Thesis (which clearly states one specific assertion):One of the most bold and powerful characters in literature comes from Macbeth. This character is Lady Macbeth. She climbs to the top using many disturbing traits in which most would frown upon or belittle. She proves these traits through ambition, cunning, and mental strength.
BODY 1
I. Body Paragraph 1
A. Topic Sentence #1 (specific claim that directly proves a part of your thesis and focuses this paragraph on one idea): Lady …show more content…

39 ln.24-27
b. Commentary (explain the connection between the evidence and reason): Lady Macbeth explains how she wants to criticize him with brave and encouraging words to make him courageous enough of doing what he may be too afraid or hesitant of doing. She desires to share her most deep opinions and thoughts. In this case, how keen she is on him becoming the king and receiving the crown.
2. Sub-point A2 (Reason - one specific aspect that further explains T.S.): Lady Macbeth takes the prophecy she was told about and suggests she is willing to do anything to make it a reality proving furthermore her ambition. By fate or will, she is determined to make the prophecy come true. She wants to become queen alongside her husband as king.

a. Specific evidence (to back up the reason): "Glamis thou art, and Cawdor; and shalt be
What thou art promised." pg. 39 ln. …show more content…

Commentary (explain the connection between the evidence and reason): Lady Macbeth reacts to the prophecies her husband has told her by message. She implies that she will ensure the prophecies will come true by saying “shalt.” Saying this gives the audience the idea that she’ll make the prophecies come true no matter what.

3. Closing Sentence (tie the ideas in the paragraph together in one sentence, and make clear that this claim has proven your thesis): Although her true personal intentions aren’t entirely clear, Lady Macbeth very much wants her husband to become king. With or without supernatural forces she is determined to make this come true. She is so determined the prophecies will come true that she even tells her husband that they will in certainty. This ultimately proves her strong desires of achievement.
B. Topic Sentence #2 (specific claim that directly proves a part of your thesis and focuses this paragraph on one idea): Lady Macbeth is manipulative.

1. Sub-point B1 (Reason - one specific aspect that further explains T.S.): Lady Macbeth shows manipulative aspects through the way she controls her husband's mind in some instances. She goes on to trick Macbeth in one way by making him fulfill her bidding through reverse

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