Narrative Essay On Disneyland Race

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Once there was this race that was going down all around Disneyland. There were this girl named Squeaky. She loved Disney and everything about it. Then to get into the race everyone had to dress up as a Disney character to get into the race.
Before Squeaky left her mom told her to be safe in the park and to not to lose any of her Lilo costume while she was running. She then went to the race hoping she would win the race and get to bring home to big trophy that you got if you won the race. When Squeaky got to the front of the line to get in, the lady then asked
“Can I see your ticket mam’ “
“Of course you can” said Squeaky as she handed her the ticket.
Then as Squeaky went into the race she was kind of sad that Raymond couldn’t race with her, …show more content…

As they both started running, they noticed that they were in the lead. As they were in the lead, they person on the side who was keeping track of how many miles each person had so far, said that they both only had half a mile. That means that they had already ran 3 miles and they were both still going strong to finish the race. That is a very good sign since everyone's way far back in the race.
Then that moment Squeaky noticed something. She noticed that there was someone in the back of them. The person was Raymond, her little brother! She was in so much shock but also so proud of him for getting in the race and at least trying to run even though he really couldn’t.
Then at that point in time, winning wasn’t her first priority anymore. She was in so much shock and so happy to see her brother that she went back and gave him a huge hug and started running with him so that they could finish the race together like family should.
At that moment in time, she realized that because she had ran back to her brother, she had lost the race. Then once the air horn went off signifying that someone had one, she was sad. On other hand she was also was also happy that her brother got actually do the race with her and that they got to finish it

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