Many things in a story can create suspense, the way characters act, setting, the mood and the point of view. In the short story “Lather and Nothing Else” by Hernando Tellez, the central conflict is a major source of suspense. Suspense is first created when Captain Torres enters the barber shop, through the use of first person point of view and the barber’s actions.
The first moment that creates suspense is when Captain Torres enters the barbershop. The barber thinks “He came in without a word...And when [he] recognized him [he] started to shake” (342). This makes the reader wonder why the barber is scared of the man who entered the barber shop. THe man is then described “...taking off his cartridge-studded belt with the pistol holster suspended from it” (342). The reader then begins to wonder why the man has a pistol holster on his belt. It is then revealed that the barber is a revolutionary and that the manis Captain Torres,
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who is the barber’s enemy. Furthermore Captain Torres has killed dozens of the barber’s allies and friends. All these things about the entrance of Captain Torres create suspense which adds to the central conflict. The first person view creates the main conflict of suspense.
If the story would had been told from omniscient third person, then one would have known that Captain Torres knew who the barber was and then we would not have had the suspense of whether Captain Torres knew who the barber was. Furthermore if the short story was from Torres’ point of view the story would still be suspenseful. The first person point of view whether it was Torres or the barber still makes the story suspenseful. If it was Torres’ point of view then the suspense would come from whether or not. Nevertheless if the story was told from objective third person then we would not have known anything about what the barber was thinking and if he even knew the Captain and would have just seemed like a Captain and would have just seemed like a Captain talking about his job with his barber until the very end. If it was told from other point of views it wouldn’t have been suspenseful, therefore it had to be told from first person view in order for the main conflict to be
suspense. The actions of the barber create suspense in the story. The barber is holding a razor to Torres’ neck and not knowing if he is going to kill Torres creates a lot of suspense. The barber thinks “A little more lather here under the chin, on the Adam’s apple, right near the great vein” [345]. He knew how to kill Torres’ and had every opportunity to. Nevertheless the barber keeps thinking where Captain Torres’ blood would flow, why he should die and what would happen if he didn’t, “But [he’s] shaking like a regular murderer. From his throat a stream of blood would flow on the sheet, over the chair, down on my hands, onto the floor” [345]. Even at the end of the story, he cannot decide what he wants to do, whether he is going to kill Torres and save the rebels or let him free and let him kill the rebels, “And so, which will it be? Murderer or hero? My fate hangs at the edge of this razor blade” [346]. The barber’s action create the suspense of whether he is going to kill Torres or if he is going to let him free. In “Later and Nothing Else” by Hernando Tellez, one of the major sources of suspense is the central conflict. In the story man things contributes to the suspense. The initial entrance of Captain Torres into the barbershop, the use of first person point of view and the barber’s action all contribute to the suspense of the story. In a story almost everything can create suspense whether it is a plot, character or atmosphere.
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If the story was in third person limited, there would be no fear or suspense, because we would not know the barbers feelings/thoughts. Which means,”I started to shake”, would not be there(and all the other feelings/thoughts of
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