Kim Jong-Un Essay Outline

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Essay outline
Introduction
Attention grabber
Four-Star General, Chairman of the National Defense Commission, and chairman of the Central Military Commission, are a few titles held by one of the most influential world leaders.
Thesis
Kim Jong-Un was one of the most influential world leaders because he solidified his position as supreme leader, improved the North Korean Nuclear Arsenal, and put fear in eyes of many people.
Body #1
Topic sentence
When Kim Jong-Un was sworn in as North Korea's Supreme Leader in December 2011, he received an a great deal of power and authority over the North Korean government and military.
Detail #1
Kim Jong-Un’s uncle, Jang Song-Thaek, was a possible successor to Kim Jong Il. people believed that he would promote reforms within the …show more content…

Detail #3
Soon after Kim Jong-Un was declared supreme leader, he started demoting officials that were employed by his father. He did this to limit their power, so that they would not be able to overrule his laws and decisions.

When Kim was elected as the chairman of the National Defence Commission, he became interested in developing and testing more nuclear weapons.
Body #2
Reason #2
When Kim Jong-Un was declared supreme leader, he vowed “to Build up his countries nuclear arsenal…” by researching and testing more nuclear weapons (New York Times).
Detail #1
In the April of 2012, North Korea test fired a rocket, that broke up shortly after launch. The test fire was still disapproved internationally.
Detail #2
December 2012, North Korea successfully fires a long range rocket over japanese airspace. The purpose of the launch was to put a satellite into orbit.
Detail #3
September 2016, North korea conducted their first hydrogen bomb test.
Conclusion sentence
All of the nuclear weapons that kim is researching and testing, has put fear in the eyes of other leaders around the

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