Staples wrote “Just Walk on By: Black Men and Public Space” in order to make people become aware of the stereotypes and discrimination happening against black men. His purpose of the essay is to also convince people that the events that happened to him, such as being confused for a burglar, happen to black men often; that in fact, “black men trade tales like this all the time” (Staples 397). His solution to stereotypes against him is simply to ignore them, even if they hurt his feelings. He also tries to “take precautions to make [himself] less threatening” (Staples 397). Another thing that he does in order to make himself seem less threatening is to “whistle melodies from Beethoven and Vivaldi” (Staples 397) because he believes that no criminal or murderer …show more content…
would even listen to such composers. The reason why he wrote the essay was because he felt the need to address the stereotypes laid upon black men specifically and how they affect their everyday lives. Being stereotyped and judged made Staples feel “surprised, embarrassed, and dismayed all at once” (395) because he couldn’t believe that he was perceived as a viscous criminal. His intended audience is all readers, but specifically readers who are of color because the essay is specifically about situations pertaining to those of color.
His essay could serve to change the opinion of those who perceive black men a certain way because Staples does a good job at explaining his feelings. He supports his argument by beginning with an anecdote--the story of his “first victim” (Staples 394) and how she feared him and assumed he was dangerous because of his color. All of his examples are either experiences that have happened to him, or to people that he knows, but they serve as good arguments because they prove that things like that do happen to black men often. Throughout the essay, Staples provides more examples of stereotypes in action, such as when a black male journalist went to work on a story about a murderer but ended up being confused for the actual murderer (Staples 396). The author’s claims are strong enough because the situations weren’t casual ones. For example, being mistaken for a murderer is not something that is taken lightly; the reporter who was in that situation could’ve been put behind bars for something he didn’t do, all because he happened to be a man of
color. In paragraph five of the essay, the author seems to briefly be okay with the fact that women are afraid of him, which could be a counterargument in the essay. He says that “women are particularly vulnerable to street violence, and young black males are drastically overrepresented among the perpetrators of that violence” (Staples 395). However, this small counterargument doesn’t overcome his argument that black men are often victims of harsh stereotypes and discrimination. Staples’ argument could have been stronger if he would’ve used more examples. If he were to rewrite his essay today, he could add something about police brutality in order to make a stronger argument. His arguments were good enough though because he gave enough examples of black men being stereotyped.
The author mainly appeales to pathos. She tells a story of a woman being stabbed while her neighbors look on and also, of a man, named Rodney King, who was beaten by a few police offices while ten other officers looked on. These are good examples for her argument but, she uses these infrequent instances to try and sway her audience into thinking that they are common occurrences.
Brent Staples, who was a journalist for the New York Times, and studied mental philosophy at the University of the Chicago, shows the different subject positions in his published version of the “Just Walk on By: A Black Man Ponders His Power to Alter Public Space”, and his draft version of the “Just Walk on By”. Brent Staples wrote two different versions of the essay, but the essay’s subject position is pretty different to the reader. Also, each subject position describes the same situation quite differently by illustrating each way of looking based on dissimilar perspectives. In his published version, he describes himself as “I was twenty-two years old, a graduate student newly arrived at the University of Chicago”(Staples 240). Also, the published version says, “To her, the young black man—a broad six feet two inches with a beard and billowing hair, both hands shoved into the pockets of a bulky military jacket—seemed menacingly close”(Staples 240).
“Just Walk On By” started out as Staples’ sad life story, but turned into the story of a man who eventually came to terms with the difficulties he would deal with in his life, and he faced them with a positive attitude. “Complexion,” unfortunately, ended with Rodriguez feeling self-defeated and believing he would never find a resolution to his problem. He did not want to ignore the issue of his skin color, but let it slowly take over his life. Seeing them side-by-side, these essays start out with the same problem, but eventually go in completely different directions near the end. Staples and Rodriguez dealt with the racism and social judgment on the inside and both had radically different resolutions.
In Brent Staples’ "Just Walk on By: Black Men and Public Space," Staples describes the issues, stereotypes, and criticisms he faces being a black man in public surroundings. Staples initiates his perspective by introducing the audience in to thinking he is committing a crime, but eventually reveals how the actions taken towards him are because of the fear linked to his labelled stereotypes of being rapists, gangsters and muggers. Staples continues to unfold the audience from a 20 year old experience and sheds light onto how regardless of proving his survival compared to the other stereotypical blacks with his education levels and work ethics being in the modern era, he is still in the same plight. Although Staples relates such burdens through his personal experiences rather than directly revealing the psychological impacts such actions have upon African Americans with research, he effectively uses emotion to explain the social effects and challenges they have faced to avoid causing a ruckus with the “white American” world while keeping his reference up to date and accordingly to his history.
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