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In his article “Against School”, John Taylor Gatto writes regarding his opinions that America’s current system of schooling children is bad within itself, and unfixable. In this essay Gatto includes confusing personal antecedents, historical examples that do not correspond with modern day society smoothly, and overall he just does not fully explain his already weak evidence. Due to this, instead of convincing parents to take their children out of school and rethink society, he just leaves the reader confused over what the problems truly are.
Gatto starts his paper off by addressing the problem of boredom in public schools, something who has ever attended a public school can attest to. Because the majority of his audience already agrees with
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this statement Gatto can then make a claim about why he thinks students and teachers are so bored. Gatto states that we are all to blame, and supports this with a personal story from his experience with his grandfather. While it can be difficult to use personal narrative to support an argument, here it works efficiently, having the audience view it as a wise old man giving life advice, making them more likely to buy into the idea that we are responsible for our own boredom. However, then Gatto seems to leave this argument of being bored behind, not referring it for the rest of his essay. It functions as a good hook, but children and teachers being bored alone is not a sufficient argument for ending our school system without further explanation. Gatto’s next personal story he tries to use as evidence is about a school he worked at wrongfully terminating him, remarking how hard it was on his personal life, but how it gave him time to reflect on his experience. Unlike the grandfather antecedent, this one just leaves the reader thinking ‘what?’. It appears that Gatto wanted to use this information as another reason to argue why America’s schools are bad, but this example is so unique and not the everyday person's school experience, so the only effect it does have is to make the audience wonder ‘does this writer just have a personal vendetta against schools?” Even though his essay is titled “Against School”, Gatto also devotes a lot of it to an ‘against childhood’ stance, which does not entirely make sense. The first thing he does is draw a connection between the two ideas by stating that “By the time I finally retired in 1991, 1 had more than enough reason to think of our schools ... as virtual factories of childishness” (Gatto 684). In the paragraphs preceding this Gatto calls the adults who terminated him ‘childish’, yet fails to share his definition of this term, and more importantly just claims schools were making people childish, assuming causation from an association he has with a few people. If his demeaning comments about childishness weren’t enough to clearly express Gatto’s views on childhood, he then uses many historical examples, and gives his audience advice for raising their own children, “Don't let your own have their childhoods extended, not even for a day. If David Farragut could take command of a captured British warship as a pre-teen, if Thomas Edison could publish a broadsheet at the age of twelve, if Ben Franklin could apprentice himself to a printer at the same age... there's no telling what your own kids could do” (Gatto 690). Upon first glance this may seem inspiring, but really it is deceiving and incorrect. Edison did attend public school for a while, and then because he had an attention disorder and his teacher was not equipped to handle him his mother, a public school teacher, home schooled him. Franklin didn’t just turn twelve and start studying by himself with no experience, he had been in school for years before. These historical figures only half support his argument because yes they did study independently, but they also received school curriculum that allowed them to reach where they did. This argument also is inefficient because the phrasing of the comment clearly indicates that the reader is a parent, but I don’t believe any modern day parent would want their twelve year old anywhere near a war ship. Gatto’s other historical example of Ariel Durant does showcase how a child not acting as in they are in their ‘childhood’ can succeed, but his description also prominently includes the description, “was happily married at fifteen” (Gatto 685).
In modern day American society it is a widely accepted belief that fifteen year olds should not be getting married because they are children and even though this happened in the past does not mean it should continue happening now. We have looked at the research and accepted that childhood is a distinct developmental stage, so looking at glorified historical figure’s childhoods is just not an effective method for Gatto to get his point …show more content…
across. While his historical references may be questionable in some regards, they are not the biggest flaw in Gatto’s logic. The biggest flaw is that he has none. Throughout his entire piece Gatto makes large claims with very strong word choices, and says that school is the problem, but he never elaborates to add in the linkages of how. There are a few instances such as when he references standardized testing and overcrowding schools so that they look like warehouses; two very legitimate problems with our school system. However, these are the exceptions, and for someone who was a school teacher for thirty years one would think he would talk about being inside the classroom. One of many places we can see this lack of explanation is at the end of the essay where his tone and style shift to an angry rant and he mentions “divorce laws have removed the need to work at relationships” “We buy computers, and then we buy the things we see on the computer” “We buy $150 sneakers whether we need them or not” (Gatto 689).
He writes an entire anti-consumerism rant pointing out what he thinks to be flaws in our society, and then ends it with “our schooling, as intended, has seen to it” (Gatto 689). This structure is not an argument, it is a group of complaints and then an assertion of the blame onto the schools. Gatto doesn’t elaborate, give any type of personal or statistical evidence, or even explain his reasoning of how he thinks the way schools are related to this. In some places he states what he thinks schools are doing to children, that they are “encouraged to develop only the trivializing emotions of greed, envy, jealousy, and fear” (Gatto 689) However, he has no evidence of how schools are doing this, and this is not some universal statement such as that school can be boring, it’s an incredibly specific uncommon belief and in order to persuade anyone Gatto has to provide more evidence and
explanation. While some of what he says makes logical sense, Gatto overall is not entitled to the broad claims he makes against childhood and against school. With some irrelevant personal antecedents, outdated historical examples that do not transfer into our modern day society, and with a lack of elaboration or explanation, his essay just leaves the reader confused and with questions. Even with the claims that were logical they did not fully back his argument as one could ask ‘why don’t we just make reforms, why get rid of it all’, and most importantly he never discusses an alternative, making it the reader’s job to wonder what a world without school would look like instead of being told.
As American’s we place a high level of importance on attending school and receiving a certain level of education. Across the world, the recommendations for attending school vastly differ based on the culture of the society. In America, we require our children to attend school until they are almost of legal age, push high school graduates to attend college and we constantly emphasize structured learning. Many children in today’s world lack many skills that would allow them to “teach” themselves outside of school leading to an increased interest in televisions, computers, and phones. Technology has taken away society’s attention away from independent learning such as reading, writing, and outside experiences. John Taylor Gatto’s emotional voice in his writing “Against School” has allowed me reveal my psychological voice regarding the educational system.
Labaree discusses how the United State’s education is in a school syndrome, as people in America want schools to teach society’s ideals as well as let people express their individuality. These two demands are polar opposites that cannot be achieved. As the focus goes towards balancing these in hopes of improving society as a whole, the bettering of actual student learning is put on pause. Labaree talks about the beginning of education reform, in the 19th century, being the most successful in developing society; however, as education reform continued throughout time, its effectiveness wore off. He then addresses how the desire for education reform is more about improving society than it is about learning. He finishes his argument by providing possible solutions to fixing this problem, but states that fixing this problem will never happen because no one is willing to give up both demands. Overall, Labaree goes in wonderful detail explaining the problems of education reform. What made me choose this article was that he addressed the desire that people have on school systems in promoting both society normality and individuality. This correlates well with my topic in whether public school systems promote conformist ideals or individuality.
Although Gatto does use a significant amount of facts throughout the essay, they do not come from any credible source nor are they cited from one. An example of a given fact but not cited is, “ George Washington, Benjamin Franklin, Thomas Jefferson, Abraham Lincoln? Someone taught them, to be sure, but they were not products of a school system, and not one of them was ever “graduated” from a secondary school.” (Gatto 273). Gatto is using a fact that is highly informative. However, since it is not cited from any type of credible source, the audience might not count it as a valid piece of information or take it into consideration. To give the essay even better credibility, Gatto should cite all factual information he
Gatto begins his argument with a personal account from when he was going through school as a student. He began falling into the “routine thinking” of school, where he was bored and felt unsatisfied with what he was learning. His Grandfather stated, that if [he] was bored, it was [his] fault and no one else 's. The obligation to amuse and instruct [himself] was entirely on [his] own” (Gatto, 115). Gatto reflects on his
This argument can be valid in some cases, but students cannot learn everything on their own, they need guidance and help from teachers to develop the skills they need for the future. Gatto’s theory that children are kept at a baseline education is true; however, there are students who are pushing themselves to be above average, and he leaves theses students out of his argument. Gatto compares students to addicts, but does not specify what they are addicted to, making this a faulty argument. He claims society’s rise in immaturity has lasting effects on students maturity; although this can be true, he has no evidence to back up this
To begin, there are several concepts about compulsory education that aggravates John Gatto and he explains his concerns in his essay “Against School.” Gatto’s first concern is everything is about school is boring. “Boredom is the common condition of schoolteachers (Gatto 608).” If the teachers are bored, they will create a dull and boring environment for the students. “Boredom and childishness were the natural state of affairs in the classroom (Gatto 608).” Lack of creativity and freedom is another concern of Gatto. “An educational system deliberately designed to produce mediocre intellects (Gatto 611).” Also, Gatto thinks school is unnecessary. “George Washington, Benjamin
Gatto uses the example of George Washington, Benjamin Franklin, Thomas Jefferson and Abraham Lincoln not attending twelve years of schooling and turning out just fine. In fact, he goes on to point out that most famous Americans in history, such as Edison, Carnegie and Rockefeller, to name a few rose to be admirals (p. 302), without attending high school. The main point Gatto seems to be explaining is that so many historians went without the twelve years of schooling and came out well educated. Although Gatto points out the historical stand point, Alfie Kohn uses past research to get his point across. As Kohn explains, studies after studies have shown that students starting from elementary school – up until graduate school are less interested in learning the material as a result of being graded. (p. 287) Also, the strive to get into college or graduate school depends on grades and GPA which puts more of a focus on having the highest grades and GPA, causing students to stress over making an A rather than a B or C, fearing that they may be turned down from a
We live in a society where we are surrounded by people telling us that school/education and being educated is the only way to succeed. However, the school system is not up to the standards we want it to uphold. There are three issues we discuss the most which are the government, the student, and the teacher. In John Taylor Gatto 's essay “Against School”, we see the inside perspective of the educational system from the view of a teacher. In “I Just Wanna Be Average”, an essay written by Mike Rose, we hear a student 's experience of being in a vocational class in the lower level class in the educational system when he was supposed to be in the higher class.
Most high school students can 't wait for their school year to be over because they feel exhausted by the seven long periods of classes and not to mention boredom. John Taylor Gatto, a former New York State Teacher of the Year wrote an article called "Against School." Gatto criticizes the school system for their inability to meet the students’ expectations and for putting limits on their ability to learn. The children feel neglected, and the teachers feel helpless because they have to work with students who are not interested in the materials they are given. Gatto mentions how US high schools have become affected by adapting to the Prussian education system. According to Gatto, the purpose of high school is to manipulate the student 's mind
Many people think that going to school is the only way to get an education, to gain knowledge, to have a better understanding of society. Malcolm X didn 't necessarily believe that and nor did John Taylor Gatto, who wrote an article "Why Schools Don’t Educate." Gatto believed that schools kept children from being independent. If schools kept children from being independent than children weren 't being mentally alive, it was holding a child back from actual education. When they are in school the children focus on the time rather than the actual assignment, making them possibly fail because they lost the real importance of education. Gatto stated "The homeschooling movement has quietly grown to a size where one and a half million young people are being educated entirely by their own parents. Last month the education press reported the amazing news that children schooled at home seem to be five or even ten years ahead of their formally trained peers in their ability to think." (1) This shows that students that are given time to actually study and stay focus on one subject without being timed are more likely to succeed than a child that attends school. Given students the feeling of being mentally alive, to be able to embrace the
The main focus of the article “Against School”, by John Taylor Gatto is the problem of modern schooling. Throughout the paper, Gatto examines the background of schooling and explains the purpose of the modern school system. The article captures its audience by surprising them with all the different facts and ideas of modern schooling. It starts by telling the author’s own story about how boring secondary school teaching is, which can make readers think that being tired of teaching at a secondary school is what makes the author want to be completely against school. Gatto then writes that this problem is fixable. In his essay “Against School”, John Gatto makes everyone understand that he does not believe schooling is necessary. He gives examples
... people are more advantaged than others and will receive a top notch education, while others will receive a mediocre education that will prepare them less for college and more for a working class job. There most likely is a connection between social class and the educational opportunities presented to students, but it is also possible that other social forces are at play which determines the quality of a student’s education. In Gatto’s essay it was argued that are educational system is designed to perpetuate faults in order to create a manageable society. He supports his argument with various strong statements which makes his logic convincing, but he falls short when backing the credibility of his claims. The strengths of his essay prove to also be its weakness, which results in a piece of literature that only succeeds in arousing emotional reactions from readers.
He argues that students “want to be doing something real” (Gatto 23). Also, he explains that they produce a manageable working class and “mindless consumers” (27-28). His point is that students want to learn something new that helps them in their life better than actual books from school which don’t apply their interests and their experience (23). He recommends home-schooling as an option to schools (24). Gatto claims that contemporary schools “adopted one of the very worst aspects of Prussian culture: an educational system deliberately designed to produce mediocre intellects.... ...
...ociety; we do not need teens, which are not ready for marriage, to be married. Marriage is all about compromise, understanding, and give and take. Teens have not fully grasped that concept yet. They need to experience more in life before becoming married. They are missing out on so much; it is truly not worth it to rush into marriage.
A time approaches in every person’s life when they must come to learn new things. Speaking on behalf of all those who have attended school at some point in their life, I must say that most do not like it for its educational significance. Today’s youth undervalue the worth of America’s public school system to the point of shame. Hard-working, underpaid teachers and professors prepare to educate these ingrates as their living, and it’s exasperating for the students to not even care. I must be fair though and call attention to the fact that not everyone shares this loathe for education and schooling.