I Survived Climax

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After reading this story, I feel lost and unsatisfied because of the slow climax, dull plot, and the unfinished structure. This story was very boring. It was a bit inspiring, but not that exciting. I suggest that you read one of the “I Survived” books since it is my favorite series of books. I recommend that you don’t pass this book down to the new 6th Graders next year. Now that was slow paragraph, let’s talk about this book’s slow climax. This book has a very slow climax. Nothing very exciting happened. Usually in books, the climax happens at the middle of the book. On this book, the climax happened at the very end. I personally don’t like this change to books and i'm sure you don’t too. This story did have a climax, but not a very good …show more content…

The plot is just not interesting. One reason is that its plots are very spaced out (at least the big ones). All of the big events are also very rare. They are not that important either. All of the ‘drama’ started happening between the end of the middle part of the book, and the very end. This is also a reason why this has such an unfinished structure. Like I said, the structure of this book is completely broken. One example of this is when he, Bud, was on the streets. He had a friend named Bugs. They were buddies. Then once he got out of that foster home, he disappeared, never to be talked about again in the book. Another example is Lefty Louis. He is the main protagonist of this book in my opinion. He brought Bud to Herman E. Calloway. After this he disappeared, never to be seen again, just like Bugs. This is a very bad mistake and needs to be fixed. Although I may portray this book as being completely terrible, it can be very enjoying for others. It was very thought out and very realistic, and I love realistic-fiction. But still, this book is just not for me. I don’t recommend this book to people. This book would be good if it didn’t have my 3 main reasons. This book is not for me because of its slow climax, dull plot, and unfinished

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