Harlan Coben's Essay 'The Undercover Parent'

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In Harlan Coben’s article “The Undercover Parent” (2008), the author argues that installing spyware on children's devices is necessary, and not doing so, would be irresponsible parenting. Coben develops his claim by first explaining why precautions should be taken when installing parental control software. Then he provides his reasons as to why counterarguments don't apply to the situation. The author aims to forewarn the dangers of children's online activities and propose a solution to protect them. Coben writes intensely for parents to emphasize that children with unmonitored machines become vulnerable to harm. Harlan Coben used many debatable points in his article “The Undercover Parent”. For example, Coben states “Now, after doing a fair amount of research, I get it” (paragraph 1). This evidence suggests that Coben did the appropriate …show more content…

Another example of the text that weakens Coben’s argument is when he makes a broad statement without backing it up with any statistics, Coben states, “-yet when it comes to chatting with pedophiles or watching beheadings or gambling away their entire life savings, then. then their children deserve independence?” (paragraph 5). Lastly, Coben makes an example of his friend's daughter. Coben’s argument would have been stronger had he used an example that could easily be fact-checked, however, he used an example that may not even be real. Coben states, “One friend of mine, using spyware to monitor his college-bound, straight-A daughter, found out that not only was she using drugs, but she was also sleeping with her dealer” (paragraph 13). When this sentence is added, it is meant to inflict fear on parents who might have “college-bound, straight-A” children, however, when one uses fear to get their point across, it should be conducted with evidence as a backbone to their argument. Therefore, for these reasons, I believe that many parts of Coben’s argument can be

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