Expository Analysis Project: Single Concussions

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Dominique Hogan
Aug 31, 2017
5th
Expository Analysis Project
The articles are “Concussions in sports” and “A single concussion may have lasting impact”. The article “A single concussion may have lasting impact” is a little more convincing and more informative. It lists out a lot of details on how to fix or treat the problem also using facts for example,“In this case, the scientists concentrated on all Swedes born between 1973 and 1985 and looked for those who had experienced a head injury of some kind before the age of 25. More than 104,000 people qualified.’’ “Concussions in sports” was more pleasing to read because it was shorter and simple, it was a broke down version of the other article “A single concussion may have lasting impact”. It also had it subject broken down into different sections for example, “What happens after a sport related concussion, how should a sports related concussion be evaluated?,ec.” …show more content…

but i feel like the author of “A single concussion may have lasting impact” could have did a little better by highlighting each section but had great information that could help athletes. Both article didn’t really joke around because the subject was a little far too serious to joke around with. They were more of and serious and informative articles. Concussions aren’t a joking matter and should be taken

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