Examples Of College Admissions Essay

Hannah Roach English 12, Period 8

College Admissions Essay Ms. Mclaughlin

Option #1: Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.

Art. Art is everything, without it we wouldn’t have all the things we enjoy today. Without Art we would have to say goodbye to books, movies, drawings, paintings sculptures, unique clothing, music, etc...Art is much more than just something to oogle at, Art is filled with passion and for many people it is a way of life. My way of life that I hope to achieve is writing and drawing to my heart’s content. Both bring me joy and carries me away from reality which is almost always

I’m willing to bet that there are many others that feel the same way as I do, without art we would cease to exist. There would be no point. When I found my first love which is art I was at about the age of five. The moment I held a pencil I think both my parents and I knew I was going to be a drawer. I’ve never stopped since then, feeling the pencil drag against paper allowing me to create whatever my heart desires, I couldn’t love anything more than creating different pieces of art whether it be a painting or a drawing of some kind. But I’m not naive I know I still have a lot to learn. But I’m more than excited to learn more about what I love and improve myself. I wish I could say the same about my second love which is writing but I can’t, because at first I hated writing with a passion before it became one of my passions. I hated having to write essays, book reports, poems, short answers, etc...Seeing a pen and lined paper nearly made me gag. I had almost the same feeling toward reading, I didn’t like the thought of being stuck in a world someone else made where I could not choose my own path and had to see a world through eyes that were not