//This is NOT my work. This is my friend's writing who asked me to analyze her paper while her computer was broken: * MT. EBOTT - 201x * Your home town. ------------------------------------- * (You run around with Frisk, feeling joyful. The weather felt pleasant. A comforting breeze blew across the landscape.) * (She stops, resting in the cool grass, sighing peacefully. You smile, flopping into the grass face-first. She giggles.) * Hey Kia, betcha I can climb that. * (Frisk points to Mt. Ebott, particularly the hole.) *Are you crazy, Frisk? You couldn't possibly do that, heck I couldn't. * (You shrug. Frisk smirks at you.) * I might be. C'mon, let's go! * (She starts running head first into the pine forests, going straight for Mt. Ebott.) …show more content…
* FRISK!
Wait!! * (You start a sprint, going after her. You worry she might get hurt from falling off the mountain.) * (Secretly, Frisk is scared. But she feels determined to climb the mountain. She uses the vines and rocks to get her way to a "flat" area, near the pit.) * (You know that the only possible way to stop her is by climbing yourself.) * (Gathering your strength, you start climbing as well. You wish to stop her from climbing up to that pit.) * (Just as you arrive, you see Frisk trying to he around it.) * D-Don't worry, I can- * (She drips over a vine, falling
down.) * F-Frisk!? * (You dart over to try and get to her, but you trip over a vine yourself, falling into the abyss yourself.) ---Hours Later...--- * (You awake in a bed of flowers, buttercups from the looks of them. You itch the back of your head, expecting some sort of pain.) * (You feel no pain from the fall.) * F-Frisk..? * (You look to your right and see her, softly asleep.) * (Even after all of that, you can't help but smile, and blush a little.) * (You shake it off, getting out of the flower bed as you try and wake her.) * M-Mhh..? Kia..? * (She gets up, thinking she hit her head. But she too realised that there was nothing wrong with her.) * Right here, Frisk. Are we in Ebott..? * (You help her stand up, she dusting her clothes off. You do the same with yours.) * I-I think so.. * (She looks over, both of you notice the grand ruined doors. You're the first to speak up about it.) * You think that's our way out? * (She shrugs, and you give each other confused looks.) * Guess there's no other way to find out. * (You take her hand and walk across the hallway, as if it's illuminated to the grand archway.) * (Both of you see a lonesome buttercup flower in the distance, planted in a small patch of grass. But.. You felt something different about this one..) * Howdy! I'm Flowey! Flowey the FLOWER!
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