Dhonielle Clayton's Weight

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Dhonielle Clayton’s short story “Weight” follows two high school seniors, Grace and Marcus, trying to answer the question, “Should we break up before leaving for college?” After hearing glowing reviews, Grace and Marcus decide to go to the Heart Scale Center, a clinic that removes, examines, and weighs the hearts of couples to see who they love the most. The couple has an unconventional past when it comes to love and relationships. Grace’s mother died when she was a teenager, and Marcus’ father cheated on his mother. This has certainly destroyed their view of love. While the couple may have loved each other at one point, Grace and Marcus’ love for each other is not real because of their attitude before the procedure and the results of the procedure. …show more content…

However, his concerns stem from the test possibly showing that his love for Grace is not as strong as hers is for him. While in the waiting room, Marcus reflects on what the results may be. After some time, he concludes that his heart would show love for his mom, sisters, brothers, dad, and Grace. But he worries that the test might show something else. He wonders, “If his curiosity about being with someone else might affect his love for Grace” (Clayton 6). This again shows that their love for each other is not real. Because of the length of their relationship, Marcus begins to fear what he may be missing out on and is curious about being with someone else. While curiosity alone does not reveal that they do not love each other, Marcus admits that this curiosity might affect his love for Grace. The results of the procedure also demonstrate that Grace and Marcus’ love for each other is not real. The test works by showing the names of loved ones imprinted on the heart. Hearticains, medical professionals trained in reading the heart, carefully read and describe each imprint to show who and how much each person loves. Fresh imprints are new loves, scabbed imprints show a dead love, while the depth and size of the imprint shows how heavy the love is. While examining Grace and Marcus’ hearts, the heartian comments, “Female heart has one large scabbed imprint and a small fresh imprint. Seems like a new love is budding. Make a note of it. Male heart has one large imprint. Three quarters of it is scabbed. Semmes like a fading love” (Clayton 11). This clearly shows that their love for each other is not real. Grace has fallen out of love with Marcus and has a new love, whether she wants to admit it or not. Marcus is currently falling out of love with Grace. His curiosity about loving another person supports

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