Cyberbullying Rhetorical Analysis

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1. I think your essay was not written too informally at all. It was relatable in a way that wasn't so casual. I not only understood where you were coming from with your arguments but I also found an agreement in what your overall takeaway was. It was a message that was not harsh in the sense of being a horrible human being but in regaining the strength and social status of society itself.

2. Considering your essay is primarily about the emotional effects of too much phone use, cyber bullying would have a good role in this essay. It would strengthen your argument greatly. Not to mention, it provides another scenario for people to relate to considering everyone knows at least one person who has become a victim of cyber bullying,

3. Aside

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