Creative Writing: The Colorado Rocky Mountains

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Madison Knight read her bank balance for the second time. Dead broke.
Until now, holidays in the Colorado Rocky Mountains had always been her favorite time of year, but that was before the money ran out—before facing eviction.
She didn't believe in windfalls, at least, not from long-lost relatives or lucky lottery numbers. Any serious chance of getting ahead came down to her New Year's bonus from Once Again Antiques. Today, December twenty-fourth, starting at nine a.m. until closing, twenty percent of all sales generated from the client wish list contributed to the bonus—if she held onto her job until New Year's. One more misstep, one more unsatisfied customer, and there’d be no ifs, ands, or buts—the owner, Savannah Charm, would terminate …show more content…

“Should we ship to your home address?”
“I prefer to pick it up in person.”
“Okay then.” She read off a confirmation number.
“After all this, I owe you.”
His voice, smooth as a caress, left a trail of goosebumps on her arms.
“It’s my pleasure. Our website also lists additional details.” She wanted to tell him to click on the employee icon, but it might sound too bold.
“I’ve seen it, and by the way, you have a great smile. I’ll pick the painting up at noon.”
He sounded like he was flirting, but she couldn’t be sure. Maybe he was the friendly type. She checked the Roman numerals on her trendy wristwatch. “Mr. Murdock, thank you. Noon works for us.”
“Please, it’s Zach. Let me thank you. How about lunch?”
“I’d enjoy lunch, but I can’t.” Was he asking for a date or a business meeting? If it was the latter, he’d expect her to pay for her meal and an expensive dinner wasn’t in her budget.
Rain check?”
Strangers, regardless of how handsome, didn’t fit into her dating categories. Still, she had his credit card number, address, and a picture. Didn’t that change his status to an acquaintance? “We’ll see.”
“Not good enough.”
“All right, rain check. Take care out there in this snow.”
“Will

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