Creative Writing: 'Thank You'

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“Thank You”
“Thank you,” Now being a thirteen-year-old girl who just called her mother the worst human being in the world, I wasn’t expecting that to come from her. When just moments before I’d been hiding in the hotel’s bathroom, thinking of every little scenario that could play out as my punishment. The ideas being as simple as my father yelling at me, others of me being grounded, or the bigger picture of them, hating me. So when they got Jacky, my sister, to usher me out of my sanctuary, I was plain terrified because of the habits I did even before then.
It started when my father was laid off and was home every day. He was there twenty four seven and if you knew who he was, you’d know that he is the loudest person out there. Along with that, and the never ending questions of, “What’s for dinner?” I was going crazy. Eventually after the tenth day, I had snapped, glaring at him any time he would talk. Purposely I’d slam the door on his everlasting voice. It wasn’t like my father liked being home, he was a worker, so that’s when he got the idea of California.
Everyone agreed except me, because I had a family back in school. It didn’t help that one of the reasons they repeatedly smashed the idea in my face was that the people in Derry …show more content…

With My Freshman year, I was still learning, but by sophomore year I took my parents in cars separately and gave them hints to what might be wrong. Junior year I lead my father’s role of referee between my mom and sisters. Senior year, now I look back to realize that moment of my mom saying thank you made me switch from being uncaring to aware now. My temper has changed because my father told me to just breathe and I do. I’m still learning today how to become an adult in many ways but I believe sense eighth grade my maturity has changed enough to take on responsibilities I needed to bring to my home. Plus, even when we are adults are we ever truly mature enough to the extent of

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