Creative Writing: Stuck On Mauna Kea

Stuck On Mauna Kea

“Hey Izel turn right right here so we can go to Mauna Kea,” I said
“Ok Raslandel, if you say so anyway it’s your helicopter,” said 21 year old Izel.
So Izel turned right. A few minutes we were right above Mauna Kea. all of the sudden a snow storm struck. “Get us out of here,” I yelled.
I didn’t have to say it twice. Izel turned the helicopter around. At least we thought he did. A few seconds later we were on Mauna Kea. “Are you okay?” I asked Izel.
“Yeah you,” he said.
“Yeah,” I said. I got up and looked down. “Hey Izel we’re on top of Mauna Kea,” I said.
“Ok let's start going down than shall we raslandel,” Izel said.
“Fine with me I mean you’re the boss ‘cause you’re 21 and i’m only 18,” I said “waaait shouldn't

we stay by the helicopter so if some people come and search for us they will be able to see the helico…..?” There was a sudden rumble and I saw a helicopter overhead we started to yell “Over here.” “Down here.” what felt like one thousand times but the helicopter just kept on flying. Two days later Izel and I had a nice little underground shelter it fitted both of us and still had a some extra room.
“Hey Raslandel,” Izel said.
I answered “What do you want now.”
“Nothing just waking you up ‘cause it’s time to go hunting,” he said. We had made Two spears, two bows,and 100 arrows we had made by carving sticks with some glass from the helicopter.
“Ok,” I answered. So with that we were of into the woods. Within 5 minutes I had spotted two birds fighting over a worm, I pointed it out to Izel. “Look over there,” I had said. We raised our bows and shot at the birds there was a flutter of feathers and then just two birds with an arrow in each one.