Creative Writing: Sarah's Takeover

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On June 24, 2015, Matt and Sarah came home from war. Their family and friends had a huge pool party at Sarah’s parents’ house. Avery and Channing organized this party, because they are Matt and Sarah’s closest friends. Avery, who is 25 years old, isn’t much of a party person, or pool person, but she still agreed to do this because she knows it will make everyone happy. Channing is a 26 year old attractive guy, who is also very strong. Although a reason Channing helped plan the party, might because he has a huge crush on Avery. Later that day Avery and Channing were setting up for the party. They hadn’t seen each other since high school, and forgot how much fun they had together. Channing did most of the talking telling Avery about how college …show more content…

Avery and Channing had the whole place ready and family and friends were starting to arrive. Everyone brought different food from cookies, to cupcakes, to mac in cheese, and so much more. Everyone was at the party and it was only 15 minutes before Matt and Sarah were going to be home. You could tell how happy everyone was. Channing was watching outside for Sarah and Matt. They finally pulled in and Channing yelled “guys they’re finally here.” Avery jumped up and ran outside to give Sarah a big hug. Once everyone got to say hi and talk they all went to the pool and started having a lot of …show more content…

Avery’s parents weren’t around because they moved to Arizona when she got out of high school, so Channing stayed with her the whole way. When they got to the hospital, they took her to surgery, because she had bleeding in her brain. When the surgery was over they informed Channing that Avery was in a coma and they didn’t know if she would wake up. The next week was horrible for Channing and Avery’s parents. When Channing was starting to give up hope he whispered into her ear “Avery I’m in love with you and I’m sorry I didn’t tell you earlier, but I need you to wake up so we can be together.” An hour later Avery woke up from the coma and saw Channing by her side. Channing was so happy he hugged her and said he loved her, Avery said she loved him too. Avery’s parents were so happy, and her mom started to cry because of it. Channing right then and there purposed to Avery. She was so shocked and said yes. Even though it was sudden they had both been in love for so many years, and knew each other very well. They had always been in love but just said to tell each other. In a way the coma was a blessing, and they we realizing it

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