Creative Writing: My First Vietnam War

We are in the valley. The after effects of the bomb has us all shocked. I hear a high pitch ringing in my ear. The men are all down. We all manage to get back up ,and we start back tracking. We were going towards the city but we started running towards the valley. Away from the burning city filled with sin and regret. The smell of burning buildings, people yelling out for help, and syrians roaring , but all the advertising and technology went silent. While I are running away from the city we felt the heat of the flames all on my back. We got far enough were the attackers wouldn't have spotted us and killed us. All that runs through my thoughts are that why did they tell anyone that we were in war it is more important than the pill advertisement

for making you happy. All of the people that could have saved themselves before this demise of every living person in that city. All of them dead. We continued to run through the valley. The valley that was almost a desert due to the abuse of mankind; that mother nature could never repair. I turned around and I saw these men in military uniforms running after us. One of the men running after us yelled at us saying “Hey stop! We are here to help you. Stop running!” The men began to shoot at us. I yelled back, “If you are helping us than why are you shooting at us?” One by one I saw my new friends fall and shake like they are having a seizure. The military like men had others behind them. I think they are doctors. They collected my friends bodies. I stopped running and I put my hands up. The strange men who were running after me put my hands behind my back. I feel a sudden pinch in my arm. I can't feel my arm. I felt dizzy and i blacked out.
I saw Milly and Clarisse. We are all wearing all white and laying down in the valley. It suddenly stopped. I wake up in a hospital. All white. Blank. Nothing. I'm chained down to the bed. The strange men that were shooting at me were all wearing doctors cloths. They were whispering. One man who was tall,blue eyes, and blonde hair spoke. “ How was the virtual reality experience.”