Creative Writing: John's Death In Afghanistan

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Within the first six months he had only gone home twice; throughout the six months he had also sent money to help with momma and Jane. But at the end of the fifth month, he was told he would be deployed at the of the next month to Afghanistan. It was that time, time for John to leave even further away to Afghanistan; and he had just told his momma and Jane so not to worry them. Throughout his year in Afghanistan he was never allowed to come home once. He could only send and receive letters from them; but that wasn’t enough. Finally the sargent allowed him to go visit, John wanted it to be a surprise. He finally arrived and momma said it was the greatest surprise to finally see him. She called him her little hero. Unfortunately he had …show more content…

As he was in sight of the base, an enemy bomb exploded. The noise of the explosion was piercing, the damage was dreadful, the deaths were too many to count, the injuries were ten times more, and John almost died. A day after the explosion search, men were still out looking for soldiers to see if there were any others that made it. At the end of the day when everyone was ready to give up looking for unfound men, someone a few feet from where John was standing saw something in a hole, which was created from bomb. “HEY!!! HEY!! SOMEONE COME OVER HERE!! I THINK I’VE FOUND SOMEONE!!!” a man yelled at the top of his lungs. As it took a few minutes for someone to reach the man through all the rubble, they began pulling fragments from the hole until they saw someone, it was John. The two men began working faster and faster until there was enough room to pull him out. Once he was completely out, the two men picked him up carefully and ran him back to the base as fast as they could where the hospital tent was ready to take in anyone who was found and brought to them. John was one of the men with more serious injuries and he was immediately laid down on the stretcher. Unfortunately the

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