Courtney Cox's Asshole By Jil Jill Soloway

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Here is my revised review. I received no notes from classmates, but I did get notes from the VWC. She said that: “I think that the information you are trying to get across to your reader is there, but the organization is making it a little confusing. You may want a paragraph that talks only about the author, and then get into the book that you’re currently reviewing in a separate paragraph. In your second paragraph, I wasn’t sure what book you were reviewing, or if you were reviewing the TV show you mentioned. “ Paperwriter gave me a score of 81 or a B with my first draft, with one misspelling, an overused phrase score of 1.7, a vocabulary score of 92 and an overall B. The new draft gave me an overused phrase score of 2.3! and my score went down to an 80. Taking the notes from the VWC and organizing my review differently, here is the revision. This book review suitable for submission to Zyzzyva.org (Blog). …show more content…

I first became aware of Jill Soloway when watching a sex scene in the television show “Six Feet Under” and thinking to myself – “a man didn’t write that”. Looking her up on the imdb, I found her to be the writer of the episode and a long standing writer on the show. I also discovered the YouTube series of clips of a speech she made to the “National Organization of Women” that I have since forwarded to every female writer-friend I have. Hers is a voice that is changing the landscape for women in American

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