Beach Amusement Park Persuasive Essay Sample

Kendall and Maddie were racing down the stairs. Kendall and Maddie were both in sixth grade and had the same birthdays. They were going to Indiana Beach Amusement Park! They found out about it by there friend Addy. They asked Addy to come, but she went to Florida with her family. They were so excited to go. They would not stop talking the whole way there, and that took about one or two hours. After about forty minutes they were both emerging for food.

They had seen a Wendys near by, so they decided to eat there. They both got there usuals, a hamburger with only ketchup and pickles, a side of fries, and the best thing of all a vanilla and chocolate shake. They scarfed it down in about ten minutes , then they were ready to start heading

Then they springed out the car door and were already in line. The tickets were almost one hundred and thirty dollars a piece. But it was worth it. They had a zip line rope to go over the lake. They could already smell the Elephant Ears ( A very good type of carnival food). The amusement park with the lake looked peaceful but on the other hand a little scary and fun.
After deciding on what ride to go on first they picked the little rides and then went up to the extreme roller coasters. They both decided the one thing they aren't going to go on is the ferris wheel. They both decided that it was a little to hair-raising (scary).
After they finished riding the beginner or tiny roller coasters they decided to get some yummy, delicious, mouth drooling Elephant Ears (A type of carnival food). After that they went to the beach to settle their stomachs. They even got to feed these big fat, hungry fish. That you could hear them eat and they would fight over the food. It was nasty but cool at the same time.
Then we rode the extreme roller coasters. Maddie was a little scared at first but then she was all up for it. The whole way down this big drop they were crying tears of joy and it was funny because you could see there faces push back just like the movies. But then they were all sad because they had to