Atomic Bomb Persuasive Essay

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Thesis:
On August sixth 1945, 8:15 AM, the first successful atomic bomb attack was dropped on Hiroshima, Japan. Due to Canada’s involvement in the making of this destructive weapon, many peoples' perspective on Canada has changed for the worse.

First Argument:
Major Idea/Opening/Topic Sentence:
-To start the Manhattan project, they needed-> Uranium & Plutonium.
-Canada discovered that with nuclear fission of these two chemicals they could start chain reactions that would give a lot of disastrous heat energy. (Pitt Education)
Point/Evidence #1:
-Miners risked their lives when they were searching for uranium because they were exposed to radioactive waves which is a huge health concern
Evidence/Proof of Point - Citation/Source:
-Based on the U.S.NRC,“Radiation can kill you (if you are exposed …show more content…

Point/Evidence #2:
-Canada has made an invention that we know, one day, it will make us extinct.
-all that Canada got from making the bomb was creating nuclear war for the rest of the world, Canada hasn’t gained anything from making it except regret.
Evidence/Proof of Point - Citation/Source:
-From LiveScience:"This method involves detonating a bomb so big that it blasts the Earth to pieces."
Analysis/Significance to Thesis:
-This shows that Canada could be the blame for the world's destruction, that’s enough information to make others think of negative of Canada.
Concluding Sentence/Summing up of Major Idea
-Canada may have introduced a new invention to the world, but it also introduced to itself negative

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