Anthem On Demand
Timed (50 minutes) Essay
Writing Prompt:
Politically, Anthem depicts a completely collectivist society. What ideas do the rulers appeal to in order to justify their collectivist society?
Directions to the Student:
Write a response to the prompt above, presenting your thesis and using textual support. Follow the following steps to ensure you meet all requirements:
Make sure you understand the prompt.
Format your essay in MLA format.
Include a BRIEF introduction paragraph with a hook, background information, and a thesis.
Support your thesis statement by including a body paragraph using the ACECED method.
Cite and embed two direct quotes from Anthem in your response. You may use in-text or parenthetical citations, whichever
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sounds better. Include a BRIEF conclusion paragraph with a restated thesis, summary of ideas, and a lesson learned. See below for a checklist of requirements. A scoring guide is provided on the next page. Writers Checklist My paper includes effective use of paragraphing. My paper includes a beginning (introduction), middle (ACECED body), and end (conclusion). My paper stays on topic. My paper flows smoothly from one idea to another. My paper contains a strong controlling idea. My paper includes specific and relevant details, reasons, and examples. My paper uses precise and vivid language. My paper contains sentences that are clear and varied in structure. My paper includes correct grammar/usage, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling. SCORING GUIDE ON THE NEXT PAGE ON DEMAND ESSAY RUBRIC 5- Advanced/Exceeds Contains a brief introduction that follows the inverted pyramid format Fully restate/answer the question by borrowing language from the prompt Includes the author/title in response Skillfully cites and embeds BOTH quotations using all sources; Explanations are skillfully used to prove how the quotations prove the topic sentence (answer) Contains a brief conclusion that follows the pyramid format Fully demonstrate awareness of purpose, audience, and task Maintains an objective point of view; Maintains unity, coherence, and fluency No grammar errors; 4- Proficient/ Meets Contains a brief introduction that follows the inverted pyramid format Restates/answers the question by borrowing language from the prompt Includes the author/title in response Cites and embeds BOTH quotations to proficiency using all sources; Explanations are used to prove how the quotations prove the topic sentence (answer) Contains a brief conclusion that follows the pyramid format Mostly demonstrates awareness of purpose, audience and task Mostly maintains an objective point of view; Mostly maintains unity, coherence, fluency; 1-2 grammar errors; 3- Nearing Proficient Contains a semblance of both an introduction and conclusion Mostly restate/answer the question by mostly borrowing language from the prompt Attempts to include the author/title in response Attempts to cite and embed BOTH quotations; Explanations are somewhat used to prove how the quotations prove the topic sentence (answer) Somewhat demonstrates awareness of purpose, audience and task Somewhat maintains objective point of view; Somewhat maintains unity, coherence, fluency; 3-4 grammar errors; 2- Basic May not have an introduction and/or conclusion Somewhat restate/answer the question by somewhat borrowing language from the prompt Somewhat attempts to include the author/title in response Attempts to cite and/or embed quotations; Explanations are somewhat used to prove how the quotations prove the topic sentence (answer) Attempts to demonstrate awareness of purpose, audience and task - Rarely attempts to maintain objective point of view; Rarely maintains unity, coherence, fluency; 5-6 grammar errors; 1- Below Basic No introduction or conclusion paragraph is evident Does not properly restate/answer the question or borrow language from the prompt Does not include the author/title in response Does not properly cite and/or embed quotations; Explanations are rarely used to prove how the quotations prove the topic sentence (answer) Does not demonstrate awareness of purpose, audience and task Does not maintain objective point of view; Does not maintain unity, coherence, fluency; Grammar errors distract the reader; 0- Blank Response A “+” may be added to any score if it is nearing the parameters of the score above it but may not meet all parameters of this score. A “-” may be added to a score if it mostly meets the parameters of this score but is very close to the score below. 5 4 3 2 1 0 93-100 (A) 80-92 (B- to A-) 70-79 (C- to C+) 66-69 (D- to D+) 65 and below (F) 0 Brooke Bishop Ms. Briesacher Advanced English II 11 April 2017 Collectivism Do you know what collectivism is?
Have you ever thought about what living in a collectivist society would be like? Have you ever wondered what people’s lives are like in a collectivist society? Collectivism is the practice of having a group be more important than the individuals who are in the group. Ayn Rand, author of the novella Anthem uses ideas by the rulers in the society she created to justify the collectivist society.
In the novella Anthem, readers can see what living in a collectivist society is like. Equality 7-2521, who is the main character of Anthem states, “International 4-8818 and we are friends. This is an evil thing to say, for it is a transgression, the great Transgression of Preference, to love any among men better than the others, since we must love all men an all men are our friends,”(Rand 30). Transgression of Preference is an idea used by the leaders of this society to control how each person feels and thinks. He is saying that he shouldn’t call International 4-8818 his friend because that would mean that he isn’t thinking about his group, he is thinking about himself and how he feels. Rand has her character Equality 7-2521 remember certains things by having him think, “the Time of Mating. This is the time each spring when all the men older than twenty and all the women older than eighteen are sent for one night to the City Palace of Mating,”(Rand 41). Likewise to the Transgression of Preference, being sent to the City Palace of Mating for the society’s rulers to mate each person, is showing just how far the rulers are willing to go to make everyone think about the group or about how the society’s people should think about the
group.
In 102 Minutes, Chapter 7, authors Dwyer and Flynn use ethos, logos, and pathos to appeal to the readers’ consciences, minds and hearts regarding what happened to the people inside the Twin Towers on 9/11. Of particular interest are the following uses of the three appeals.
This is an evil thing to say, for it is a transgression, the Great Transgression of Preference, to love any among men better than the others, since we must love all men and all men are our friends.” (Rand 30). It is impossible to not prefer one person more than the other, which is why all the men are afraid to defy their leaders by committing a transgression such as this. Equality knows he has a connection with International 4-8818, but he has to once again hide his emotions, and only know in his heart that they are friends. Later on in Anthem, Equality takes notice of a beautiful woman named Liberty 5-3000, who he immediately falls head over heels for, which is a transgression.
Ayn Rand's classic story of one man's desire to become an individual in a nameless society presents a compelling refutation of collectivism in all forms. The hero, labeled "Equality 7-2521" by the State, chooses to challenge conventional authority as he learns the joys of experimentation and discovery, the ecstasy of human love, the challenge and fairness of liberty, and the happiness of self-interest. Equality 7-2521 writes three unique phrases in his journal: 1. "My happiness needs no higher aim to vindicate it. My happiness is not the means to an end. It is the end.", 2. "We know that we are evil, but there is no will in us and no power to resist it.", 3. "The word 'We' . . . must never be placed first within man's soul.". These phrases will be discussed individually in the remainder of this essay.
Many people seem to get entangled into society's customs. In the novel Anthem, the protagonist, Equality 7-2521, lives a period of his life as a follower. However, Equality eventually, tries to distant himself from his society. He is shaped to be a follower, but eventually emerges in to an individual and a leader. On his journey, he discovers the past remains of his community. Ayn Rand uses Equality's discoveries of self to represent the importance of individuality in a functional society.
In the novel, Anthem, written by Ayn Rand takes place when mankind has entered another dark age. A man named Equality 7-2521 lives in a society where he struggles to live equal within the brotherhood. In the world he lives in people are told they exist only for the sake of serving society, and have no other purpose. Therefore, each individual is assigned a vocation as a permanent life career which determines who they socialize and live with. However, Equality being very different from his brothers, believes in individualism and rejects the collectivism society around him. The concept of individualism vs collectivism is portrayed in the story because individuality is unknown to the people where no one is unique or excellent in any way. The people
1. In a well-organized paragraph, describe the society in which Anthem is set. Some areas to consider are the political structure, degree of technology, social relationships, quality of life, and education.
In Anthem there are so many rules and controls, yet there is one that truly rises above it all. And that word is “I”. There is no “I” only “We”, for the great “We” is what they follow. And they are one not individual, they are one. And poor Equality can’t seem to understand that the rules are rules, but in a way he’s making his own rules. And he is mistreated for his looks and appearance and dosen’t seem really one with his brothers. And he’s curious and most don’t even question life, and he notices the little things, “Yet as we stand at night in the great hall, removing our garments for sleep, we look upon our brothers and we wonder. The heads of our brothers are bowed. The eyes of our brothers are dull, and never do they look one another in the eyes. The shoulders of our brothers are hunched, and their muscles are drawn, as if their bodies were shrinking and wished to shrink out of sight. And a word steals into our mind, as we look upon our brothers, and that word is fear.”(Rand 46). He has a wanting to learn and build his knowledge, but the rules don’t permit his decisions.
In Ayn Rand’s famous, or in some circles, infamous, story Anthem, the differing ideologies of objectivism and collectivism are pit against each other. With objectivism being so tight knit and different from the society in the book, it seems that it would be almost impossible to truly follow in its entirety. However, Anthem, as a whole, doesn’t violate the ideals of Rand’s philosophy of objectivism.
Ayn Rand’s Anthem is a politically satirical novel set in a future society that is so highly collectivized that the word “I” has been banned. The world is governed by various councils who believe that man’s sole reason for existence is to enforce the Great Truth “that all men are one and that there is no will save the will of all men together” (Rand, 20). Any indication of an individual’s independent spirit is swiftly and brutally put down, with the transgressors being punished with severe prison sentences or even death. It is this dysfunctional world that Equality 7-2521 is born into. The novel begins with Equality 7-2521 alone in a dark tunnel, transcribing his story.
People in every Society are placed in categories according to gender, religion, race, and age from which one of these categories includes social class. In the novel Anthem by Ayn Rand, people are placed in social classes according to the government's liking and instead of race, age, gender etc their social class depends on the job they are given by the government. This was done to treat everyone equally in order to keep peace in the society. However, sometimes equality can cause rebellion and this idea is portrayed through the protagonist of the novel, Equality 7-2521. Ever since the unmentionable times had caused destruction to the society of Anthem, the government had taken away all the free will and individuality of its people.
Anthem is a book full to the brim of symbolism. Some of it is clear to see and others you have to really pay attention to capture. Anthem is not a hard book to understand, but it can still be difficult to grasp the full meaning of it. The meaning of which is elusive at points, slipping between your fingers and resting on the pages in plain view. Unity, we, I, Ego, it all plays a major part in this book along with the symbolism of things.
Ayn Rand's Anthem shows us her view of our world united under what seems to be communist rule. For example their view of right and wrong; which Anthem portrays is a system of very strict rules which mainly make sure that everyone is involved in a collective role within the society in this system no one is considered an individual or that they can even think as an individual.
Anthem is a story of man’s struggle to be free and to fight the masses of conformity. It tells of human nature and the want to gain all the knowledge that one could possibly attain. Man loses his safe haven and his security when he lets this lust for knowledge overpower him and lets it be seen by others. He becomes vulnerable Like Johann Faust, Prometheus sells his life for wisdom. Unlike Faust, however, Prometheus is expelled from his society but gains his freedom of individuality and his freedom of knowledge and the ability to understand. In Anthem, Prometheus and Gaea sin against society to become singular and understanding much like Adam and Eve’s sin against God when they ate the fruit of the tree of knowledge to gain wisdom; as a result, they can be compared to each other by there desire for learning and by their damnation.
And if the Councils had decreed that you should be a Street Sweeper, how dared you think that you could be of greater use to men than in sweeping the street?" (Rand 71-72). The government controls many aspects of its inhabitant’s lives including diet, marital status, and occupation. In essence, Anthem's collectivist society can be summarized by, "We are one in all and all in one. There are no men but only the great WE, one, indivisible and forever" (Rand
It is a rare conception where a human being is completely and utterly alone. One problem we tend to overlook due to our primitive ideals of staying as a group, is the fact of us becoming solely to that group. In the book Anthem ,by Ayn Rand, a man named Equality 7-2521 sees this problem evolve and how it becomes a nuisance to his society. The book has made me open my mind up to the ideals of doing things for yourself and not always for those around you. The feeling of the story showing a world where many are brought down for being unique and talented hurts me as I imagine a time where all are mere specs of the world. The book hits the hard points of what can easily go wrong with our society if we decide to go over the line. I can see a life