In “From Notes on the State of Virginia,” Thomas Jefferson includes some proposed alterations to the Virginia Laws and discusses some differences between blacks and whites. First, he describes one of the proposed revisions regarding slavery: All slaves born after the enactment of the alteration will be freed; they will live with their parents till a certain age, then be nurtured at public disbursement and sent out of state to form their own colonies such that intermarrying and conflicts can be avoided between blacks and whites. Next, Jefferson indicates some physical differences between blacks and whites, including skin color, hair, amount of exudates secreted by kidneys and glands, level of transpiration, structure in the pulmonary organ, amount of sleep, and calmness when facing dangers. As he notes, these differences point out that blacks are inferior to whites in terms of their bodies. In addition, Jefferson also asserts that the blacks’ reasoning and imagination are much inferior to the whites’ after he observes some of the art work and writings from the blacks. As a result, based on his observation, he draws a conclusion that whites are superior to blacks in terms of both body and mind. However, Jefferson’s use of hasty generalization, begging the question, and insulting language in his analysis is a huge flaw which ruins the credibility of his argument and offenses his readers.
Throughout the excerpt, Jefferson uses hasty generalization to support his points. Instead of providing readers with evidence and statistics that fit the whole population, Jefferson uses generalization without providing proper evidence or statistics to sway readers to his points; this not only discourages readers from believing in his argument, but...
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...ootan are attracted to black women, Jefferson may offense some readers. As a result, using insulting language can anger and offense readers that they may stop reading Jefferson’s work.
Jefferson’s use of strategies and language is ineffective in making his points and persuading readers of his arguments. Using hasty generalization, begging the question, and insulting language in his analysis is a huge flaw which lessens the credibility of his argument and offenses his readers. Jefferson should use other argumentative strategies and prevent himself from using insulting language in order to convince readers of his arguments.
Works Cited
Jefferson, Thomas. “From Notes on the State of Virginia.” Rereading America: Cultural Contexts for Critical Thinking and Writing. Ed. Gary Colombo, Robert Cullen, Bonnie Lisle. 8th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2010. 378-383.
In 1791 Benjamin Banneker, the son of former slaves, astronomer, and almanac author, wrote a letter to Thomas Jefferson, in a courteous but forceful manner, challenging the framer of the Declaration of Independence and secretary of state on the topics of race and freedom. He touches on the topics of the way blacks were treated and seen by the common white American citizen and how it is an injustice. In his letter, Banneker uses ethos, logos, pathos, repetition, syntax, and juxtaposition to sympathize with Jefferson about former hardships to perhaps reach common ground.
However, the author 's interpretations of Jefferson 's decisions and their connection to modern politics are intriguing, to say the least. In 1774, Jefferson penned A Summary View of the Rights of British America and, later, in 1775, drafted the Declaration of the Causes and Necessity of Taking Up Arms (Ellis 32-44). According to Ellis, the documents act as proof that Jefferson was insensitive to the constitutional complexities a Revolution held as his interpretation of otherwise important matters revolved around his “pattern of juvenile romanticism” (38). Evidently, the American colonies’ desire for independence from the mother country was a momentous decision that affected all thirteen colonies. However, in Ellis’ arguments, Thomas Jefferson’s writing at the time showed either his failure to acknowledge the severity of the situation or his disregard of the same. Accordingly, as written in the American Sphinx, Jefferson’s mannerisms in the first Continental Congress and Virginia evokes the picture of an adolescent instead of the thirty-year-old man he was at the time (Ellis 38). It is no wonder Ellis observes Thomas Jefferson as a founding father who was not only “wildly idealistic” but also possessed “extraordinary naivete” while advocating the notions of a Jeffersonian utopia that unrestrained
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...kes a negative attitude throughout the article. He simply states the facts, supports them, and moves on to his next point. Jefferson never appears to be angry and does not point out anything that distracts the reader from the message that he is trying to convey. He keeps a serious tone throughout that keeps the reader drawn into what he is saying the entire time. The reader feels a sense that Jefferson is serious about what he is saying and he is not to be taken lightly at all.
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Firstly, Jefferson is an example of a person who never gave up. He is young black man that is sent to jail under the false charges of murdering. During the court session, he was referred to as a hog. This made him believe that the word “hog” defines him as a person. However, after a few long talks with Grant Wiggins he started to stand up for himself as a proud black person. We begin to see this happen when Jefferson did not refer
9. Gordon-Reed, “3 of the 4 children Sally Hemings reared to adulthood lived successfully as white people among other whites, free” (page 285) As historian Herbert Sloan put it, “Jeffersons attitudes toward his debts, his belief that in time things would right themselves, his certainty that, if allowed to do things his way, everything would turn out for the best, had significant consequences for others” (page 631).
"Thomas Jefferson and Slavery." Thomas Jeffersons Monticello Blog RSS. N.p., n.d. Web. 6 Jan. 2014. .
The Notes on Virginia (1788) written by Thomas Jefferson purpose of this writing were to explain that African Americans are inferior to Anglo-Americans afterward portraying prejudice and racism. During this time Jefferson addresses this issue to his fellow political leaders informing them of what was going in the state of Virginia and not to allow African American into their country for a particular reason.
Therefore, particular features of black people in contrast to white people is not the focus of these works. Rather, they focus on the behavior of the whites, in these cases Jefferson and the wealthy plantation owners. While the political cartoon is a direct critique on Jefferson, "Virginian Luxuries" seems more a critique on the entire institution of slavery. The title, so blatant, sounds almost sarcastic making the entire work appear to be criticizing white society for seeing humans as mere luxury objects. The critique on Jefferson is his hypocritical stance coming from the dichotomy between his writings and beliefs about blacks, versus his actions. However, the cartoon does not take a stance on whether slavery has negative or positive outcomes since the "dark sides" of slavery are not shown. "Virginian Luxuries", in contrast, critiques all of the slave owners, particularly in Virginia by exposing the negatives of slavery so blatantly that it is unavoidable. This type of display is highly unusual for this period, and because it was hidden, it was most likely not a popular opinion. During this period, it was much more common to believe in the "happy slave" as a justification to keep slavery, while this piece directly contradicts this myth. Overall, both pieces were critiques on members of white society, either through a direct critique of
"Keep Within Compass." Creating America: Reading and Writing Arguments. Eds. Joyce Moser and Ann Watters. 3rd ed. Upper Saddle River: Prentice Hall, 2002. (219-220).