Analysis Of Coal By Audre Lorde

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Ulises Mendez
ENL 3, SQ 2014
CRA 2
Tim Kreiner

Analysis of “Coal” by Audre Lorde

Audre Lorde’s poem has a very unique and intriguing name: “Coal”. Coal is the most widely used fossil fuel for energy production. Similarly, it is made up of the same thing as diamonds (which are a prominent metaphor throughout the poem) yet the two are strikingly physically different. It is imperative to note, however, that both coal and the poem’s speaker are the same color: black. The speaker, most likely Lorde herself, addresses obstacles faced by the black community and, more importantly herself. Nonetheless, it is this prominent blackness, something so natural to which negative connotations and labels have been assigned to by society, that empowers her and allows her to seek who she truly is as a person despite society’s norms and expectations.
Lorde’s poem is broken down into three stanzas, each corresponding to a separate aspect of her life. The first stanza corresponds to her race; the second stanza corresponds to the hardships she faces; the third stanza corresponds to her personal and intimate life.
As previously stated, the poem’s first stanza coincides with the speaker’s race and identity. In her first and second lines Lorde loosely associates herself with the rest of the black community, stating that she “is the total black” (2). However, physically separating “I” from “total black” parallels Lorde’s own separation from others in the black community. She states that she’s “from the earth’s inside” which mirrors the black community’s repression by the rest of the world, namely American society. In line 4 it is important to note Lorde’s purpose of the word ‘open’, “There are many kinds of open”; she is referring to that which is kno...

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...ers,” ready to come out at any moment and kill their intended prey (16-17). On the other hand, there are those that are waiting for the right moment to “explode through [her] lips” and when they do, she will be “like young sparrows bursting from shell”: with mouth wide open, allowing everyone to know what she feels and thinks (19-20). Lastly, Lorde concludes the stanza by stating that there are words that she just does not understand and torment her, which connects to the first line in the following and final stanza.
In the poem’s final stanza Lorde begins with “love is a word, another kind of open” (23). Even though Lorde asserts that “love” is another form of freedom and something which is presumably well-defined, we see that it is in fact not because of her subsequent use of punctuation after “open”, which had not been done in her previous uses of the word.

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