Gac00469 Unit Assessment: My Beautiful Dog

Certificate III EAL (Access)
Student Name:FAN KIT KONG
ID : GEC000000K
VU21469 Unit Assessment

Task 1
My Beautiful dog

1. My beautiful dog.

2. I have a beautiful dog. He is really cute. When he was a puppy he was like a little kitten. He is not big. He is black and white. His eyes are blue and are bright.

3. His name is Lobo. He is a siberian husky. He makes me very happy. I am going to take care of him and love him all my life.

4. I have a beautiful dog. His name is Lobo. He is a siberian husky. He makes me very happy. I am going to take care of him and love him all my life.

5. A 12 years old girl from china.

6. A descriptive text.

7. A dog named Lobo.

8. Beautiful,cute,little lovely,big,small.black and white ext..

9. Like a baby,like

I have in it a loving and faithful companion.it accompanies me when i go out for a walk.it begin to wag its tail when it sees me.It licks my feet.i like to play with it.I throw a ball.It runs after it and brings it back holding it in its mouth.It can swim.It answer its name.It is very intelligent.It carries my messages to my friends.It runs after cats and barks at strangers and other dogs.It plays with small children and seems to like their company.

At time,i go hunting.It goes with me.It helps me track the game.It runs after hares,foxes,jackals and other small animals and overtakes them.At night,it guards the house.It is very sensitive to sound.At the slightest sound,it gets startled and begin to bark.A theif dare not come near our house.It has a very strong

Story: Parades and horses

Character: Renee,horse

Here of the story : Renee

Summary:Renee loved parades and horses,her horses seemed to like parades.Renee work at the stables.Renee was very generous with her time and her horses

First draft of your narrative text.

Parades and horses
Renee had been married for a long time.On the weekend Renee was at the stables.She fed,groomed and rode her horses

Renee loved parades .All the states parades were organized in her computer

She never stayed overnight,Her horse seemed to like parades

Renee was very generous with her time and her horses.Renee know how to rope with expenses.She always bought the no-name,generic food for the horses

Final narrative text

Parades and horses
Renee had been married for a long time.On the weekend Renee was at the stables from morning until dark.She fed,groomed and rode her horses.She was an excellent rider.

Renee loved parades .Almost as much ad she lover her horses.All the states parades were organized in her computer.She listed the date,drive time and distance,parade time,contact people and other details she felt were