Hayden Carruth's Monday At The Border

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Throughout his villanelle, “Saturday at the Border,” Hayden Carruth continuously mentions the “death-knell” (Carruth 3) to reveal his aged narrator’s anticipation of his upcoming death. The poem written in conversation with Carruth’s villanelle, “Monday at the River,” assures the narrator that despite his age, he still possesses the expertise to write a well structured poem. Additionally, the poem offers Carruth’s narrator a different attitude with which to approach his writing, as well as his death, to alleviate his feelings of distress and encourage him to write with confidence. Carruth particularly chooses to title his poem, “Saturday at the Border,” because Saturday signifies the end of the week and is a day of rest. This symbolizes …show more content…

As a result, the narrator begins to doubt the frail villanelle’s ability to express his thoughts. Similarly, the narrator feels as though his old age, not only makes him frail, but also affects his writing abilities. He believes that his age impedes him from writing a properly structured villanelle. The poem in conversation with this one, “Monday at the River,” attempts to instill confidence within the aged narrator about his writing abilities by blaming the “Arizona heat” (Murdakhayeva 4) for impairing the structure of his villanelle. Therefore, the narrator suggests him to abandon Arizona to gain ability to write well (Murdakhayeva 6), which alludes to him leaving behind his thoughts of death in order to gain confidence in his writing …show more content…

Although the author wrote “Monday at the River” in conversation with “Saturday at the Border,” she did not maintain the same structure for her poem and particularly omitted the two additional stanzas. The omission of the two stanzas was intentionally done to demonstrate how a villanelle in its standard form should look. The narrator gives instruction to Caarruth’s narrator to ensure him that he too can write a “Proper Villanelle” (Murdakhayeva 19), one that follows the standard structure as opposed to a “Frail Villanelle” (Carruth 18), which deviates from the standard form of a villanelle. Furthermore, he suggests that Carruth’s narrator has the assets needed to write well he just needs the proper

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