Youth, Confidence, and a Job

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“Fat” by Ray Carver is so similar to Hemingway’s “A Clean, Well-Lighted Place”, that it is sometimes considered a ‘revision’ to Hemingway’s story (Oard n. pg.) The two stories are parallels in the sense that both take place in a restaurant/bar and both characters cause some sort of disturbance to the workers of the facilities. The only real difference between the two is that in “Fat”, the character in reference is a morbidly obese man who orders a great quantity of food, but in “A Clean Well-Lighted Place”, the character is a wealthy drunk who keeps asking for more booze.

I think that the morbidly obese man is supposed an example of one of the seven deadly sins – Gluttony. He starts out with an order of: a Caesar salad, a bowl of soup, bread and butter, lamb chops, a baked potato with sour cream, and a glass of water. The narrator, who is his waitress, commented, “You know the size of those Caesar salads?” I’m assuming this means it’s a pretty large salad, especially after all the dressing, cheese, and croutons - the typical variation of this salad – could be considered a large meal by itself. The fact that the waitress also keeps bringing the man bread and butter, at least 3 times, possibly a reference to the idiom “one’s bread and butter”, meaning his source of income, or a job. This leads me to believe this ‘fat man’ has the hardest job of all, eating for himself and his enormous gut. Carver also mentions that the ‘fat man’ is “well dressed enough”, so he probably has a job of some sort, or at least some sort of steady income. However, he may not be as rich as Hemingway’s ‘old man.

In Hemingway’s “A Clean Well-Lighted Place”, the old wealthy man keeps ordering drinks. One of the employees of that restaurant mention...

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...en he had a purpose. The waitress in Carver’s story picks up on the polite nature of the ‘fat man’ and wishes her significant other would be more like the ‘fat man’, instead of making fun of someone who treats her well. She realizes she had lost self respect and confidence that the ‘fat man’ exemplifies.

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Grimal, Claude. "Prose as Architecture: Two Interviews with Raymond Carver." Illinois Wesleyan University -- Bloomington, IL. 1995. Web. 01 Mar. 2011. .

Oard, Brian. ""Fat" by Raymond Carver." MINDFUL PLEASURES. Blogspot.com, 27 Aug. 2010. Web. 01 Mar. 2011. .

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