War Poems and Poets

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I have studied Rosenberg's 'Break of Day in the Trenches.' This title suggests a calm atmosphere as the break of day is very relaxing and peaceful the beginning of a new day. The whole poem has a calm and peaceful feel to it and the poet achieves this by using assonance e.g. "sleeping green" and soft consonants such as "sympathies." Even though the poem has a calm atmosphere, the message that the poet wants to say in the poem is about anger and object to war. The poet comments on the devastating effects war has on the earth and the freedom that it takes away form men. The poem opens describing the "darkness" crumbling "away" gives the effect of a bleak atmosphere as the darkness only disappears bit by bit and not gradually altogether. The use of "crumbling" conveys an image of there always being a bit of darkness that has not fully crumbled away. Maybe this is because Rosenberg wanted to give war an image of being always dark and gloomy. The poet also makes "Time" a pronoun and describes it being "druid." He may have used this technique to make war seem if it had made men dreary and the sense of time has gone back to the ancient days when life was dull and restricted. The word "druid" conveys an impression of men following a dull and restricted life of studying. I think the poet had meant to say that the same break of day happened and could have personified "Time" as a "druid" who visited them every break of day, which showed how dreary the break of day was in the trenches. Instead of it seeming like a fresh new day, it seems cold and ancient. The poet creates a motionless atmosphere by not describing the men in action. It seems as if the men are just standing whilst the rat passes them. The poet achieves the effect by just describing their appearance of "strong eyes, fine limbs, haughty athletes", as if they are standing there for him to describe. The poem gives a sense of shock in the men and they just stand there reflecting the war images in their eyes; the poet pulls the reader into the men's eyes from the rat's perspective see the "shrieking iron and flame/hurled through still heavens." These horrific images may cause the men to stare distantly and not even "quaver" whilst their hearts are "aghast." Again, Rosenberg personifies the actions of war using words such as "hurled" and "shrieking" that makes war seem like a omnipotent person overpowering men. You could also consider "shrieking" as use of onomatopoeia when

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