The Controversy Behind Barbie Analysis

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America has always been a country that strives for equality. With a recent question of equality rising in the wage system, feminism has taken on a life of its own. With women becoming the primary source of income in homes and with a woman now running for President, attention is drawn to the things in society that might be considered unequal. One of those things, targeted since their creation, is Barbie Dolls. In “The Controversy behind Barbie” author Prisna Virasin attempts to qualify the existence of Barbie Dolls to her readers. While she succeeds with a personal story to tie her readers into her argument, she fails to provide an initial thesis statement to guide the reader, she fails to thoroughly address the positive perspectives of Barbie, and doesn’t provide sufficient evidence to back her claims on the positive and neutral perspectives. Virasin uses a pathos style and …show more content…

“Supporters of the Barbie Doll state…” (Virasin 107). She never gave the readers a credible source when she talked about the positive aspects of Barbie Dolls but she did have a source talking about the negative aspects which gives the readers more trust in what she has to say on the negative side. Her main source for the negative side was an article called “Barbie Dolls” but there was no main source for her positive side.
Whether Barbie negatively affects young women or not, the doll has been gaining a lot of attention for giving young girls poor body image to look up to. Virasin's pathos argument in her essay "The Controversy behind Barbie" was ineffective, not only because of her hidden argument, but because of her lack of a focused thesis and insufficient evidence to support her positive claims. Her narration at the end does bring light to how children might view Barbie today, but the fact still remains that she claimed to be unbiased, and

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