“The Birth-Mark” Critique

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Humans have been known to seek perfection/true beauty for centuries, yet there has always been a limit to these ventures. Hawthorne’s “The Birth-Mark” shows us the extent of action that an obsessed scientist will conduct, even to his own wife, in the hopes of obtaining perfection without knowing the depth of true beauty. Aylmer becomes disgusted/obsessed with his wife Georgiana’s birthmark that is shaped like a small crimson colored hand. He acknowledges that his wife is beautiful and the narrator states/suggests that she would be perfect were it not for the birthmark that mars her lovely face (“The Works”). Hawthorne utilizes the theme of relentless striving for perfection, symbolizes the birthmark and other elements in the story, and foreshadows the conclusion of the story throughout the piece, to ultimately produce this complex psychological struggle that the protagonist goes through.
This short-story’s most pronounced theme throughout itself is that of the persistent determination to attain perfection, which is shown in the main character Aylmer’s will to perfect his wife’s appearance by removing Georgiana’s crimson blemish. This goal engulfs Aylmer’s thoughts to the point where he dreams of them and coincidently sleep-talks when Georgina is listening, so she too is burdened to confront his discomfort with her imperfection/flaw (Hawthorne). In general the author is trying to suggest to the reader that perfection can only be attainted in the heavenly world, were as, on earth humans are reminded of our imperfections by the defects that we have. In the process, Aylmer not only kills his wife but he also destroys himself because his obsession with perfection blinds him from seeing the good wife that he had. Georgiana seems to be ...

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...Hawthorne). This point is further made when Georgiana tells him that “[he had] rejected the best the earth could offer” and later the narrator compares Aylmer’s would-be happiness with a “celestial” one (Hawthorne).

Works Cited

Hawthorne, Nathaniel. “The Birth-Mark.” The Norton Introduction to Literature. Ed. Kelly J. Mays. New York: W.W. Norton & Company, 2013. 340-351. Print.
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