Summary Of Impoverishment Of Sightseeing By John Daniel

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In the “Impoverishment of Sightseeing”, John Daniel seeks to inspire readers to experience nature beyond observation. Daniel clearly differentiates between the minute appreciation received from sightseeing, and the aweing admiration you can feel if you engulf yourself in nature. Through sharing his personal experiences and scholarly analysis, Daniel demonstrates the importance of being vulnerable to the environment that is necessary for comprehensively understand nature. He argues by allowing ourselves to be naked to nature, one can understand how the natural World has the power to limit our existence. The personal and analytical writing style allows his essay to be both convincing and relatable. Under the personal scholarly genre, Daniel …show more content…

He begins the paragraph describing himself climbing a granite face in Yosemite, here the verb climbing emphasizes the difficulty in traversing the rocks. Daniel gives the reader additional context by subbing “only a few hundred feet up, most of them.” This gives the reader a quantitative basis for the magnitude of the climb, and also reinforces the progress Daniel has already made. In the next sentence, Daniel describes his focus on each small crack immediately before him, where his use of immediately emphasizes his concentration. Daniel then describes the granite flaring in his peripheral. The word flaring demonstrates natures power to subject an individual to see and feel. Daniel describes the vision of the granite face becoming increasingly clear and vivid in his mind. This sentence develops a connection between what is seen and something that occupies the entirety of his mind. Additionally, in order for the granite face to occupy the entirety of Daniel’s mind it had to have been reoccurring and focused …show more content…

Daniel also provides extensive imagery during this paragraph to help the reader visualize themselves and build curiosity, leaving the reader wondering what they would see and feel if they were also to climb that rock face. Overall, the paragraph contributes a powerful personal experience to Daniel’s argument to experience nature actively. The personal experiences that Daniel cites all serve to demonstrate the depth of understanding nature that is possible. Daniel argues that with a furthered understanding of nature, the environment is seen as integral to life. Throughout the essay, Daniel caters to personal motivations to convey his opinion. Daniels emphasis is on the benefit of broadening personal wisdom rather than environmental causes. According to Daniel, the primary benefit of in depth experiences is gaining a new understanding of the

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