Rhetorical Analysis

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In his critical article, William Golding contends that there are three grades of thinking and that “nine-tenths of the population” does not engage in the higher grades. He supports his contention by weaving in baroque syntax, featuring demiurgic imagery, and touting audacious diction. Golding’s purpose is to explain the grades of thinking by characterizing all three in order to urge the audience to think more critically in the higher grades. He embraces a cavillous tone (“conversion of the world to my way of thinking might be difficult,”) that reaches out to educated travelers and readers of the Holiday.

Appendix:
1. Rhetorical Strategy: Syntax
Example(s):
a. “No, I didn’t think, wasn’t thinking, couldn’t think—I was simply waiting in anguish …show more content…

Sentences where conjunctions are excluded make the flow of the writing more urgent and aggressive. This allows the reader to connect with Golding because the reader can also be frustrated with thinking which leads to a change in their thinking process. Cumulative sentences provide information after a stated idea. After these extra details, Golding uses the conjunction “but” to contradict what he initially proclaimed. The reader is able to feel confident in Golding’s writing because of the holistic view he provides and actions will be more likely taken towards higher grade …show more content…

By using examples like repetitious cows and rotten apples, which the reader interprets as negative and dull, Golding emphasizes why thinking grades three and two are easier and not as acclaimed nor challenging as grade one. Grade one thinkers are active in their pursuit of information even when the future is uncertain; nature drives them forward. With this information, the reader gains insight to the highest thinking grade which propels them forward with their thoughts.
2. Rhetorical Strategy: Diction
Example(s):
a. “clairvoyance” (para. 27). Intuitive knowledge
b. “intolerant contempt and an incautious mockery” (para. 29). Feeling negative, insultive
c. “portentous” (para. 34). Ominously significant or indicative
Link to Argument: Powerful word choice gives the reader passion for Golding’s purpose because of how the words stir at their drive for improvement. At young ages, people have the ability to be intuitive about the thoughts of others even if those thoughts are only grade three. Golding emphasizes that understanding the importance of valuing all thought, no matter the initial negative regards, because grade one thinking takes time to come to fruition. The reader knows something but not everything; however, Golding gets them to believe in the power of their own thoughts if an effort is made to upgrade

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