Revision Narrative: Literature Based Out-Of-Class

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Revision Narrative
Since this was our last literature based out-of-class essay for the semester, I had a hard time finding places in which to revise. When receiving Dr. Moe’s comments over the course, I not only applied his suggestions to each given paper, but used them as references for all my writings over the semester. Originally, I was not going to include the epigraph. However, I remembered how Dr. Moe often wanted us to clarify and command the essay from the very start of the work. Although my title gives the three topics in which I am discussing, I still felt that it was not enough for the depth of this paper. When looking online and I stumbled upon the quote by Whitman and I knew including it would be the that extra heft the title needed.

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